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for MISSION: Get Hermione Laid

by Fervesco

person Anna-chan
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NEED SEQUEL!!! I don\'t care HOW you do it, but I NEED A SEQUEL!!! Please make it the same characters, and maybe have them playing another game of cards. And please have smut in every chapter!!! I LOVED this fanfiction, and know that I will reread it MANY times!
person Pauline
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nicely done. Could have easily become squicky, but you kept Hermione in control and obviously enjoying herself. ;) The interactions between the men esp, were very entertaining and very much in character. An incredible piece of erotic writing, thanks.
person Maku
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
IF your going to write a sequal i\'d sugest adding some tourture methods like bondage, candle wax, and maybe even whips. *getting shaky and all fluttery eye\'d* sorry I have a thing with tourture love it to bits. you might not want to use it or you might it\'s up to you. OH and i really loved this story please please make a sequal PLEEEEEEEEEEASE!!
person Demonic Angel
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*runs to her car in the pouring rain to grab her smokes*

Did you say possible sequal? Oh please you have got to do a sequal here on this one...holy shit. emonemonic Angel
person daeth
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you have now joined the ranks of the demi-gods and demi-goddessess. This story of yours was just simply fan-bloody-tastic. You rock as a writer. I loved it. Many gifts are placed at your feet. Keep up with the absolutely spectacular writing.
person Sooz
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so, so glad i wore a skirt when I was reading this story
It\'s so, god, I dunno, erotic?!
I\'ve fingerfucked myself senseless while reading this!
Please, write a sequel!!!!
person SassMacfru
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YES!! to a squeal. I really enjoyed this story, humor and smut , just go together so well.
person MissCrystalix
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW! A 4-SOME!!! OMG WOW! I SERIOUSLY HOPE YOU PLAN TO WRITE MORE FANFICS LIKE THIS ONE!!! ABSOLUTELY DELICIOUS!

P.S. The extended-time polyjuice potion should have arrived by now. Personally, I plan to knock Hermione out (probably with a blunt instrament of some sort), hide her somewhere, take the potion, and then procede to invite the boys...erm...the MEN to a rematch ;)
person danielle
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this story needs a sequel and a reunion of some sort
person elvirasnape
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE THE SEQUAL!!!! I LOVED THIS STORY.