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for MISSION: Get Hermione Laid

by Fervesco

person daeth
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have to right more, I beg of you right more. I am on my knees at your feet begging you to right more as I kiss your feet. PLEASE!
person shemhamforash
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhwhhooooo.....was trying to study and read this at the same time..once again, fic has won out in a BIG way.

Am melting into seat...thankyou..

For this reason, please excuse the short review, I am sure you of all people understand..

Well done...really, really, really...well done

Much respect and love, waiting for the next...

Shem xxxx
person cookie35
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HEY! WHAT\'S THE DAMN DEAL?! that was way too short!! you left me all wet!! i can imagine what hermione felt!! i want more. ooh! and hermioone\'s sooo agressive. i love your hermione! keep up the good work!
person jo
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOOOOOOOO!!!! This is shaping up nicely.....except of course for one itsy-bitsy little detail.......I\'M JEALOUS AS FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Was that enough exclamation points to give you a good idea of the sheer magnitude of green-eyed-monster-iness I\'m talking about here? Hell no, there\'s no fucking way it could\'ve been.....*breaks down and sobs at the cruelty of fate*
-jo

ps: by the by, I\'m a HUGE red dwarf fan, but the time got switched around somehow and I can\'t find it anymore! What channels/times is it on?
person Rilla
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I would be quite happy if this story just went on forever. This was my favorite line this chapter: \"If I can
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3, 3 sex gods, 3 shirtless sex gods... 3 has just become one of my favorite numbers!!! Had to give myself a few minutes to regain enough composure to type.... I WISH I was her!!! In case you can\'t tell, I am LOVING this!!! Deb >^..^<
P.S., Hope you did well on your exam!!! 1 question, how in the hell can you concentrate after writing something this HOT?!?!?
person cw
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! keep writing
person Malfoy\'s bitch
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god you gotta continue really soon, this story is fucken hot!
person Susan
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! If you have anyone to eat chicken vindaloo I will die!! hahaha.
person luxy
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow! ok you have got to finish this! i am planning on re-reading this drunk, very drunk. should be good! anyways, amazing, perfect, and my favourite pairing...3 men! and one girl! ;) anyways good job! keep it coming! cheers