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for MISSION: Get Hermione Laid

by Fervesco

person Viviane v.C.
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, this is fantastic!!!! really interesting und well written!! *lol* and hooooooooooooooootttttttttttttttttt!!!!! Go on, as soon as possible
person madisonfairie
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD, you have to update this quickly. Like yesterday! Can\'t wait to see what else Sirus gets up too!
person deedee
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I never really like poker until NOW:) What I wouln\'t do to be in Hermione\'s place right now! After that little show, I\'m surprized Sirus hasn\'t thrown her on the table and have his way with her. So who will she choose? Or will she get all three? I can\'t wait, write more.
person Sher
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God!!

Warning: Extreme Jealousy is really rearing it\'s ugly head now! If I were in Hermione\'s...erm...position after Sirius did that to ME, I\'d be on on my back within two seconds! I refuse to believe that this is the last action he\'s going to get (pretty please, let the sex god get MORE). :D

Meanwhile, somebody better call 911...

*THUD*



person MissCrystalix
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
....I LOVE YOU!!! WRITE MORE! THIS IS THE BEST!

(note to self, kill hermione, use pollyjuice to become hermione, rejoin poker game) ;P
person Maku
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
God Damn it this is good i fetl like i was there in hermione\'s place Jesus your extremely talented*
person alexial
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story so far!! quite funny, imagining severus and lupin just sitting there staring at what they just saw. looking forward to more!!
person MaddyRiddle
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW, WOW! I can\'t review right now... I can\'t even breath... that was WOW!
I need to be Hermione! I want the doggy *drools until the keyboard starts complaining about drowning*
The wolfie is so sweet... I guess now he has better ideas of what to ask if he wins another round *evil grin*

*remembers the wolfie and insist with shameless begging* Please, Please, Please... I guess by now you know what I want ;)
*stops begging and go back to drooling mode*

(note to self: remember to drool away from keyboard... If compy explode I can\'t continue reading wonderful fic)
person missM
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well written, lots of fun. Can\'t wait to read more!
M
person animegrl
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I must say I am very Happy I founs this little gem!!! wow, you are a great Smut writer :) please make this a nice long, long fiction with lot and lots of rounds of cards :-)