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for MISSION: Get Hermione Laid

by Fervesco

person mssudie
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh!! please let snape be the first...and second...and third................how can i concentrate now?
person LacyC
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is DAMN! I went to read the next chapter and it wasn\'t there. Very bad. Very very bad. Please write more soon!

person Rilla
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have Snape down! That is exactly what I would picture him choosing. What a great way to start my morning. :)
person Fish
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOOOORE, sir...\"

lol...

as you can probably guess by the little outburst there...
I NEED MORE!

Lucky Hermione!

More soon...

ciao,
Fish
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Am reading this between loads of wash.... going up & down stairs is proving difficult.... cheeks hot, tummy in knots..... ythisthis is going to kill me, but can\'t think of a better way to go ;-) Hell, I thought I\'d gotten it all out of my system since hubby was home the last 2 nights.... have been proven totaly wrong!!! Will have to try ice water, ice packs..... I LOVE the way you write!!! I really can\'t wait for the next update!!! Deb >^..^<
person kate
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the mind reels ... i mean, not many can write \"fuck me, sir\" in a way that sounds erotic but you managed.

no offense to sirius and remus but i believe i\'m hoping its severus that gets to play the first round of hide the wand.

keep up the incredibly hot work. usbausband is going to appreciate the results of your story (hehehehe).
person Titania
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Myohmyohmy! Nothing like a spanking for a bad bad girl, at least that\'s what my boyfriend says. I am as bad as possible as much as possible. Now, go get that man of yours! You deserve a spanking as a reward for such a good chapter! Enjoy!

A N T I C I P A T I O N! Hurry with the next!

Titania
person genrou
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwww..c\'mon, you have to write the next chaptr soon...its just too good to wait. aw man, and the fact that they are all there and only have a hand of time each....man its so good..and the way they all eye each other..my gods...please write more soon. thanks.
person nony
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey way cools!!! lol update soon
person Buttercup
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite fanfics ever. \"Get out while you still can. We are not nice men.\" What a line! I love it! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!