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Oooooh, I just wanted to smack Harry and Ron upside the head!! Insensitive little pricks! lol Continue this please. :) And your writing is fine, hun.

((raspberries and hugs))

Peeves

I rather like the start to this and I have a soft spot for stories told in first person. ;)

I like Hermione\'s mortification that she could completely lose the plot in the middle of a lesson ans so almost guarantee her detention. The idea of her almost flippant recollections is intriguing and the story is well metered and flows nicely.

The only really irritating thing is the formatting. It\'s really distracting to have to scroll across the screen to get the last few words of each line and it might be something worth fixing.

All in all, I\'ll be interested to see the story unfold.

Yeah baby!!
Fiction from Nesscafe, now that\'s what I\'m talking about!!
Fab start, my love. \"Mm fingers\" Oh to be a teen again eh! Is there a more embarressing time in a persons life?
You\'ve captured it brilliantly.
And a song too, well you know how I love my music, so no complaints from me about that!
(In fact, as a teen I loved Belinda Carlisle!)
Keep it up, can\'t wait to see what happens!
Kisses
GrrArrg

Great start! Poor Hermione...yeahght.ght. Lucky little witch! Look forward to the next part...

Yo! Just wanted to say that you\'ve got a great start here! Keep it up! You RULE!


P.S.-> On a side note, my musical tastes vary so much if I tried to base a story around it there is no TELLING what kind of crazy plot I would come up with... hmmm... lemme try anyways. \"Snape and Hermione looking at Rose Coloured Skies because they Just Can\'t Get Enough of each other, so they drive at 60 Miles an Hour and Let the Good Times Roll whilst they Oscillate Wildly (Wildly because Snape is a Wild and Untamed Thing). Then, Comfortably Numb, Hermione would declare, \'I\'m Afraid of Americans\'\"... Wow, you\'re SO much better at this than I am.

Still Ill,
TheGreyLady

Please tell me that you\'re going to keep up this story!!!! Hmmm, this is getting very interesting and Exciting!!!
More, more, more, more, more ,more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more...........

Oh Dear! This was great! I absolutely loved the way Hermione told her story. It\'s exactly how she should be speaking (when she\'s not playing Professor of the day, and acting ten years older than her age ;p)

The confused looks on Harry and Ron\'s face (how typical ;p) when she said \'mmm fingers\' was just brilliant and hilarious. You go girl!

And you better be updating soon.

Zoe (anxious to see what our nasty Potions master is going to do to Hermione)

A LITTLE hard to read, still...I liked. Snape and Hermione are a new obsessioadoradore. Can\'t wait to read more and see how Snapes gives his detention. ^_~

OH my Sweet...I thoroughly enjoyed the beginning of this...I particularly liked the language you used for Hermione\'s thought processes. It made her seem the age she is despite the intelligence we know she has...(I hope that I haven\'t offended you if that wasn\'t your intention)...

School girl fantasies are such horrid things...I was a teen once not so long ago that I can\'t remember doing similar out right dumb things...Not that you would be able to draw out exactly what these are, even by dangling Sev in front of my nose...I fear that they are far too embarressing even for a prize such as him....

A commendable start and I await the remainder...

Shem xxx

I am reviewing this with a slice of toast smothered in nutella rammed in my mouth (have to free the hands up to type y\'know!) and it seems the appropriae snack to be eating while reading this.... hot, full of chocolately snapey goodness.. with just a hint of nuts!

Am rambling... more please!

Daya.