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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey. i jsut finished your story! very Nice. If you are looking for a Beta still e-mail me ill do it!
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December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* *double giggle* *triple giggle*
Oh that
Oh that
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December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Thanks.
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December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great so far!!! This is too funny!!! How embarassing, but better her than us, right? Kinda reminds me of the time I was running down the hall in school, and of of my friends pushed me from behind and I slid, on my stomach, down the hall and right into the principals office. Of course it\'s funny now! But enough of my misery, write more soon!!!
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapters 1 & 2 & I do like your story so far*
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HAHA very fun. Poor Darren what\'s-his-name. Poor Hermione. Like the Dumb and Dumber bit. Don\'t even want to think about who\'s Dumberer... Draco perhaps? I really loved the part about not telling teenage boys about lusting after your potions master... very true, especially if you replace potions master with, say, English teacher. Not that I\'d know. ;)
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you are doing a good job. I haven\'t noticed many grammatical errors--at least not ones I couldn\'t get past. I\'m usually pretty picky about those things too. I have the next couple of weeks off from school and could probably help you beta if you still need someone. Just give me a shout in email.
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh Dear! I haven\'t laughed that hard in so long! I feel sympathy for poor Hermione but I still laughed long and
hard enough to bring tears to my eyes. \"Mmnnn .... fingers.\" ROFL Brilliant, just brilliant!
hard enough to bring tears to my eyes. \"Mmnnn .... fingers.\" ROFL Brilliant, just brilliant!
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! It is a good first fic. I look forward to more...
What is Ron\'s big idea? He has got some nerve telling Hermione that she isn\'t sexy enough. PAH! She\'ll show him. At least she doesn\'t need to keep her feelings regarding Snape a secret. Shreadready told them. That is a refreshing change from most of the Snape/Hermione fics.
I am thinking abouttingting my first story. Do you have a beta (whatever that is) or did you post and edit everything yourself? E-mail me if you can.
Happy Holidays!
What is Ron\'s big idea? He has got some nerve telling Hermione that she isn\'t sexy enough. PAH! She\'ll show him. At least she doesn\'t need to keep her feelings regarding Snape a secret. Shreadready told them. That is a refreshing change from most of the Snape/Hermione fics.
I am thinking abouttingting my first story. Do you have a beta (whatever that is) or did you post and edit everything yourself? E-mail me if you can.
Happy Holidays!
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo!!
You updated, you updated!!
Hermione is so amusing, and as for \'dumb and dumber\' I don\'t think I\'ve ever heard a phase that sums those two up better!!
As I said in my last thank you, I\'ll be happy to look over your work, but be warned that I have a beta myself for a very good reason!!
Let me know
More soon plz
Kisses
GrrArrg
You updated, you updated!!
Hermione is so amusing, and as for \'dumb and dumber\' I don\'t think I\'ve ever heard a phase that sums those two up better!!
As I said in my last thank you, I\'ll be happy to look over your work, but be warned that I have a beta myself for a very good reason!!
Let me know
More soon plz
Kisses
GrrArrg