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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding??? This is great, the grammar\'s fine, besides somehow I think that when they came up with the rules of written grammar they didn\'t really give much thought to the liberties needed for truly hot smut!!! Can\'t wait for the next chapter, post more soon. :o)
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5... This was such a HOT lead into the heat that is yet to come!!! Sounds like Hermione isn\'t at all disapointed with the Severus that is pleasuring her!!! Can\'t wait for chapter 6!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
P.S., I think you did a WONDERFUL job on this chapter, very easy to read!!!
P.S., I think you did a WONDERFUL job on this chapter, very easy to read!!!
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, sooooo HOT! Please, please, please let me switch places with Hermione!!! Good work. Please update soon!
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap I need a cold shower and they\'ve just barely gotten started. Very hot chapter. Please update soon.
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Regaeding the comment \"I need to go back to school\" ... whyever for? Hot chapter ... good smut and an ethical Severus. YES! I like!
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update!
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. It was so good of you to put in the fantasy vs the real Severus. What is Easy Word\oiceoice that you mentioned in your AN? Is it voice recognition software that types as you speak? If so I could really use something like that if it is a good program, I\'ve heard of Dragon, but I heard that it is reudementary at best and has a lot of bugs still in it. I suck at typing and cant get my own fic updated enough because of that. Sorry this is long, but I really am curious. Keep writing and I\'ll Keep posting.
elementaldeity
elementaldeity
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. But I do feel like I am being teased to death. Completion would be appreciated in the next chapter. PLEASE!!
I loved the speech that Severus gave before they started. His warning speech was really cool. It was a good variation of the \"I\'m a Bad, BAD Man\" speech. I would like to see her walk away without harboring any feelings. Yeah right, that is not going to happen.
Hot chapter though. Write more soon.
I loved the speech that Severus gave before they started. His warning speech was really cool. It was a good variation of the \"I\'m a Bad, BAD Man\" speech. I would like to see her walk away without harboring any feelings. Yeah right, that is not going to happen.
Hot chapter though. Write more soon.
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t worry about grammar... when i read I don\'t really look if the comas are in the rite place or not. This is gettin good... more soon pls!
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is not at all \"that bad\" as you put it. If it was I wouldn\'t have added it to my favorites folder, as I am really picky about being able to read a story through the gramatical errors. I cannot spell worth anything, but if it\'s not written in proper English I get cranky, lol. Please continue and know that you are doing very well.