schedule
July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you put alot of effort into this and it really shows.
well writen, with a good plot.
Thumbs up!!!!
well writen, with a good plot.
Thumbs up!!!!
schedule
February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A few comments.
Yes. This was terrible.
Don\'t make up new words.
Write out who is speaking. Don\'t make the readers have to coutn it out.
What the flying fuck is wrong with you? Do you actually get off on family members gay fucking each other? You need some serious help. I just hope you don\'t have any brothers or sisters of your own.
Yes. This was terrible.
Don\'t make up new words.
Write out who is speaking. Don\'t make the readers have to coutn it out.
What the flying fuck is wrong with you? Do you actually get off on family members gay fucking each other? You need some serious help. I just hope you don\'t have any brothers or sisters of your own.
schedule
October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fred, George... what could be better... why sex between the two! :) Lovely...
schedule
August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's awesome you should write more. gods i love twincest!
schedule
July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting to say the least. Kinky twins. ^_^
schedule
March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its not to bad but i dont like the overuse of their pett names but it was fairly god. ::smiles:: keep up the good work!