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July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This heartbreaking, and beautiful. I think you wrote Harry very well, and the little detail of calling Severus 'Sev' was something his mother did, that was quite lovely. Great job.
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's beautiful. Just one moment in time where both everything and nothing are possible. Thank you.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this a lot it has a certain quality to it that just seems to draw me in but I cant seem to put my finger on it but I defenitely like this one. Keep up the good work
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um I like it
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovely and so full of potential darkness and light.
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Don\'t add anything, I think it is good just the way it is. Sweet and sad and tender. To go on would change that and I don\'t think you should.
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It is iinteresting but I think that Severus has very intense feelings that he hides. Talking from experience....as most of us tend to, I hide what I feel and the \'real me\' for fear of further hurt, rejection, ect. Even now.....I am 36 and have learned about walls that hide and masks that show what is expected or what I want others to see. Like a multi-faceted jewel, I have many facets.....many faces....some that no one will ever see. I dare not leave myself so vunerable. No doubt you now this as well but it helps to write it done and cement the thoughts and feelings into words. Doesn\'t it? By all means....continue to write on this! I think there is more to this story than is obvious. Perhaps Severus *does* love him intencely but is afraid to show it for showing such emotion shows weakness and that is something that he cannot afford right now. Perhaps he is not allowing elf elf to feel the feelings that are really there. What is Harry leaves after he is no longer needed? What if he, Sev, is killed during the war? He would not wish Harry to feel worse than he would at this present time. So many things to look at and think of. I think you\'ll find your own way though. However, if you need any help brainstorming feel free to contact md I d I will help all I can. Welcome to our little community, good luck and happy writing! Hope to see more of your writing!