rate_review Reviews

I like your story. It\'s sweet. Like the way you layed it out with just the important events in thier lives.

Chapter 7... I really like how you are writing these characters!!! Emily sounds more mature than her age, just like her parents!!! I do so love this story & very much look forward to your next update!!! Til chapter 8, Deb >^..^<

Awwwww, how cute! Fluff, fluff, fluff.... love it. :)

Wow. I absolutely love this. Nice, beautiful, sweet romance and happy endings. Thank you.
I love the wedding vows, they\'re beautiful!

This is a really nice story about two unlikely characters. I look forward to enjoying the next four chapters as much as I enjoyed reading the first six. I like sappy, thanks for writting.

Hi Loraine-I like your writing style and use of description, but I do have one little piece of constructive criticism - the story has very little conflict in it. It is the conf and and resolution in a story that generally keeps the audience enthralled; in this story everything seems to be coming to them without a hitch (labor pains not withstanding). Still, as I said you have a lovely style and the story has a lot of potential if you give the two of them something meaty to work out. Not necessarily anything bad in their relationship, but some underlying issue that demands resolution.
Hope this helps!
Shags

OMthatthat was funny. I NEVER want to go through that...NEVER...EVER...

Ugh

Poor Hermione.

Good chapter however...LOL

Red

I really LOVE this story, it\'s FABULOUS!!! So much emotion in each well written chapter, well done!!! Deb >^..^<

Awwww it\'s so sweet!
I it. it.

awww...that is just so sweet...a baby...a baby for the two. He seems so stunned like he cant believe it. I love it. Keep it going hon.

Red