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for Dirty deeds

by Shiv5468

person Kero
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonder.

Completely original, yet totally in character on all parties.

I can\'t wait for the sequels!
person Peeves
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I should have reviewed LONG ago...yes, yes I should have...didn\'t. BAD PEEVES!! I hope all is forgiven when I say that this is one of my favorite fics. It was highly entertaining and I am anxiously awaiting your sequels. :)

((raspberries and hugs))

Peeves
person Rilla
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous ending. Looking forward to your marriage challenge response. After all, who wouldn\'t want to give Severus lots and lots of practice in bed. I love Dumbledore\'s treatment. It\'s probably my inner Slytherin, but I\'ve always wanted to see Lucius get his turn to get even with Dumbledore, even if it is just through threatening le coe comments.
person Syrenslure
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a very amusing story. I liked how Hermione developed her confidence and found herself and Severus. Slytherin-ness as a sexually communicable disease is really funny. I also like how you played out their insecurities while having them negotiate an adult relationship. Lucius was also an amusing counterpart to the story and I look forward to seeing more of him in future adventures. I am also very much looking forward to the continuing saga of this couple.
person yncarn8
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story. Loved every word, especially the rude ones.

Thanks eversomuch for the plug, \'tis much appreciated but you could have spelt my name right. Woah - deja vu!
person e
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*clapclapclap*

dug it. very dug it.

you have earned a nice break, with all the lovely writing.

ok, now get back to work... it started with a book is promising to be pretty damned good the more i read your writing, and a sequel will be, im sure... delicious.

keep on keepin on, youre one of the better writers ive seen posting into wiktt in a while *but donll all anybody else i said that* and the fact that you update a lot *dont worry, i dont have a life either, or a talent for writing. so you definately win there* just makes me heartheartheart you more.

xoxo
...me...

*s\'more claps cuz i really liked this fic and hope you know youre a good writer!*
person LeoGryffin
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi Shiv,

I regret that I haven\'t had time to come over and read \"Dirty Deeds\" until today, but reading that it was finished prompted me to come over.

It was funny, smutty, and enjoyable. Great job! I really enjoyed the diary-style and the evolution of each of the characters through the fic. Fun stuff!

Thanks also for your review of \"The Muggle\", I\'ve been meaning to tell you - everything will make sense by the time it\'s finished, but I totally understand wishing to wait until it\'s complete to revisit it. I find it hard to keep up with WIPs also, and \"The Muggle\" is pretty complex.

Thanks again for a very enjoyable read!
person Jenny
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It occurs to me to contemplate the line \"Dumbledore gets all magisterial at this point, which is easy with the robes and the beard, despite the fact his is a tosser.\"

Firstly, that\'s \"he\", not \"his\", but that\'s not actually what I was going to say.

I was *going* to remark that being a tosser has never, to the best of my knowledge, been a bar to being either a magistrate or indeed magisterial in general.
person Jenny
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Feel as though I\'ve done nothing but review this story but having now finished it I feel I should say something.

Thank you! I loved this fic!!!

Now I\'m going to go away and not read it and then come back after Christmas and re-read the whole thing in one fell swoop. Yay!
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great ending!
I\'m not that worry about what fic you update next... \'cause I\'m reading all your fics in progress. I\'ll be happy with any update. ;)
All your work is great... keep writing!