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for Dirty deeds

by Shiv5468

person jen
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Could you please expand on the whole frozen peas thing?
person LilyMalfoy
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I love this story. I really hope that you stick with your original plot line, but will be happy either way.
person Arsinoe
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is so delightful! It\'s at once high-spirited, bawdy, and sweet. Further, you\'ve kept Hermione intelligent, which many writers don\'t. Having her be a bright, energetic, observant sexual adventurer is great fun!
person jen
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very very very lusty. full of lusty goodness. full of me wanting to be where hermione is. yeah.
person Arsinoe
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very charming chapter! I loved the bookshelves, too, and I want some! Severus is adorable. I really like your Lucius, and Hermione\'s observations are very witty. So, she wants it all? Good luck to her.
person AlphaRyoko
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god this is the funniest smut I have EVER read. Your take on Lucius (split-brain one-track mind!) is absolutely hysterical -- and so true I\'ll never be abl loo look at him the same way again!

Well done! Bravo!
person AK
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story, one question though, what is a French TGV. Please give the ignorant american a translation.
person Lizski
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"half the brain is constantly working out when he is next going to get laid, or thinking about his last shag, whilst the other half of his brain is thinking about the usual things like walking, talking, eating and plotting to rule the world. If he had ever got both parts of his brain to think about ruling the world, suspect we may not have won the war\"

Gods. Some of the funniest damn lines I have read in quite a while. I am looking forward to seeing her with Lucius... (or her with Lucius and Snape - not picky!) Mmmm.
person Rilla
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! This just gets better and better!
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this! Oh how I am loving this. Wish I had something more contructive to say... but am comppletely stunned. This is great, can\'t wait for more. I always say that, knowing I can wait, but don\'t want to wait, but knowing I have to. Wondering why I didn\'t start reading this sooner.