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for Dirty deeds

by Shiv5468

person Rilla
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! Ah, what else can I say? Love this Hermione.
person Estrilda
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know you should really put a warning on most of your chapters that one should not try to drink and read at the same time. I have discovered that I can only do both with practice and then only if I sacrifice breathing - Laughing should really not be so painful, nor should it result in fluids coming back when trying to be consumed. In other words - laughed so hard that I slid beneath the computer table - so glad the kids were asleep and didn\'t have to explain that Mom is not on drugs.
person Lizzie
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heehee! Dunno why i\'m laffing! Oh well, excellent chapter as usuWritWrite another quick!
person kate
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i am SOOO not worthy (but SOOO happy) of having a chapter to call my own!!!

first, let me say that i got the ring reference (hehehe).

secondly, god bless you for pointing (no pun intended from above) out that there are some things that no couple wants/needs to share.

thirdly, it\'s always been my impression that donkeys are impressive.

and finally, if only mine were \"nearly fully trained\". even after 19 years.

thank you, thank you, thank you. other than continuing to wop atp at the altar of your literary feet, what may i do to entice you to continue this tale (tail?) to its well-deserved happy and happily shagged ending? trust me, you will be a prime player in my next fic....
person Seva
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh i\'m looking forward to hermionies detention, lol!
person celticwitch
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"I am a sex goddess, and I don
person Rilla
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Can\'t wait for the detention chapter! hehe. I want this: \"I am a sex goddess, and I don
person kate
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
is there anyway you can keep this fic going forever? please? the playfulness, the smut, the thoughts i know i\'ve had (especially about co-workers and poorly behaved children, and the helpful frozen pea suggestion... they\'re all too good to stop.

better yet, perhaps you could work on that sex manual for wanton witches. i\'d be happy to beta (yes, that was a pathetic attempt to get the chance to see your work before anyone else. sigh...)
person nesscafe
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehe! This fic is so cute! I love the inner bitch stuff! Sounds so probable! Also, I hope we get role playing in the next chapter! I know you aren\'t going to danglat yat yummy fish and not follow through! RIGHT!!!???!!! ;c)
person Estrilda
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cute and a bit naughty. I like it.