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by Shiv5468

person SandraM
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG, my ribs hurt, I\'ve been laughing so hard. Through 19 chappies I\'ve had the b/f staring at me as I\'ve giggled my way through this. Keep up the chuckles.
person kate
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Happy enough tticetice update that was willing to allow lazy husband to sit on couch, watching stupid football match. Distinct advantage of being able to learn a few new techniques (snogging, shagging and interrogating), tempered by having to deal single-handedly with children. Definitely not conducive to enjoying smut factor but may use opportunity to begin teaching tho beo be mistresses. Er, masters. Er, Molly-Hermione-Ginny-types.

Promise of daily updates lifts spirits enough to allow children an extra sweet after meal, allowing me to commit naughty bits to memory for later use.

Thanks awfully. Looking forward to Lucius\' party and the reveleation of Potions Master\'s sneaky side-trip, though I have my theory -- relating largely to Hermione\'s most recent concern re: status of relationship...
person Rissa
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well you said to review or no more updates, which means I came running to add in my few cents and pay hommage to this great piece. I\'ve been following it for several weeks now and have been thrilled to see such regular updates with outstandingly amusing content. This has been one of the most unique pieces I\'ve read involving Snape and Hermoine, or any type of fanfic for that matter. I\'ve enjoyed every line in this story and can\'t help but immediately check every day for more, lest I not receive my daily dosages of laughter and lemony inspiration. I can\'t wait to read the last 10 chapters which will be coming soon (I hope!). Thank you so much for taking the time to write this and give us poor uninspired gals something to look forward to each read. Keep up the great work, on this and the rest of your fics. :)
person Shteffi
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Look, see? A review! Don\'t not update! Wonderful, wonderul, as usual. Cannot wait for party. More Lucius... yum yum.
person AlphaRyoko
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Another wonderfully tongue-in-cheek chapter. I love your Hermione to bits -- she\'s so ... well, SNARKY! Loved the bit about \"strong women\", loved the bit about having to do the boys\' thinking for them, loved the bit about fighting pandas ... and so on and so on and so on.

Superlative, as usual.

/ gibbering fangirl
person animegrl
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This has to be my favorite out of all your other stories I love it :-)
person samson
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
loved the steam train descriptions!! its nice to know i\'m not the only person with a father addicted to trains! (go all the way round the garden, always holiday by railways! those damn steam tapes!) he gave my son the obsession too! this story gives me incentive for steam!

wonderful steamy smut. brilliant.
person gthistle
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so relieved by the prospect of Lucius and Ginny. The story\'s going well with Hermione and Severus, and it\'d hurt to see them broken up at this point. I mean, one defers to the devious mind of the author, but....
person Jenny
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, but if you\'re still planning on them splitting up you\'re making it more and more difficult ...

I like the Lucius/Ginny idea - I mean, specifically how Hermione\'s seeing it now. Definitely fits. Probably would be a good idea to explain what happened to Narcissa, though.
person Rilla
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved her line of reasoning for wanting to fix up Ginny and Lucius! Especially the part about the shoes. That should be interesting.