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by Shiv5468

person Arsinoe
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is such great fun! Hermione is so wonderfully clever and spirited! Her reaction to the Tosser is so, so, appropriate!
I love the idea about Ginny and Lucius! May we see them at it? Could be thrilling. It would be fun to see Lucius being possessive and mindlessly enamoured all at once. And Ginny finding one man who could satisfy her various needs. Pretty Please!
person Rilla
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As I was reading this chapter I was wondering if you had a Ginny/Lucius story planned. That could be just delicious. And I know this is pathetically sappy, but I\'m so glad Hermione is going to stay with Severus.
person nesscafe
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Love it! Love it! Your writing is so hillarious! My face always lights up when I see you\'ve updated! BTW! You have to write the Ginny/Lucius story! It would rock! And don\'t worry about being unfaithful to Sev! As long as you pair Lucius w/ Gin and Mione\' w/ Sev all is well!
person Jenny
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t suppose *all* of Lucius is putty in a woman\'s hands in the circumstances mentioned, you know ...
person SandraM
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why is it some of us just love to hate Ron Weasel? Every time I read the phrase \'ginger little-willied Tosser, I start cracking up. Hope there\'s more gis ins in store, cos I love Hermione\'s attitude.
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the letters between the two. Severus ng tng that he will wrap her co-workers corpses in a pink ribbon for Valentine\'s is PRICELESS!
I am always offering to wack my husband co-workers for him. It is a sign of support.
Love the letters, more please.

More Lucius and Ginny please. Lucius is just so bad and sexy. (Did I happen to mention how sexy Lucius is??)

Keep writing!
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the letters between the two. Severus saying that he will wrap her co-workers corpses in a pink ribbon for Valentine\'s is PRICELESS!
I am always offering to wack my husband co-workers for him. Ita sia sign of support.
Love the letters, more please.

More Lucius and Ginny please. Lucius is just so bad and sexy. (Did I happen to mention how sexy Lucius is??)

Keep writing!
person kate
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I would never presume that the course of true love -- or love achieved after very impressive smut -- runs smooth. Actually, the promise of \"trouble in paradise\" pleases me only because that means there are more than one or two more chapters to come. Can\'t wait.

You\'ll be pleased to know I actually had the opportunity to use your employer-related invective today in a bit of commiseration to a fd. d. I believe it brightened her day considerably. A toast to you continued good health and foul language!
person OzRatbag2
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling last review wandered off to Cyberspace wherever and so didn\'t make it onto review page.

Great minds think alike me thinks, due to overwhelming odds of both of us independantly thinking of some of same plot devices. Though having not read DD before (naughty, naughty), I feel I may just have to make reference to you in next part of PMP.

I love the witticisms, thoughts and rapid fire journalistic style of prose and the smuts pretty bloody good too! >:) Off to read more. May not need to have shower quite so warm this morning, due to inadvertent plus of needing to cool down after reading lots of good smut. ;)
person WendyNat
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! I love love love this story - the way you\'ve written in journal format is hilarious, and I have to admit I keep coming back and re-reading the early chapters every couple of days. I want more! More more more! More SS/HG, of course, but I also would LOVE to read the Lucius/Ginny fic... I really like your Lucius ;)