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for Dirty deeds

by Shiv5468

person nesscafe
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEE!!!! He gave her a ring! AW that\'s so wonderful! Go Hermione!!!! I\'m so happy for her! Oh and Severus too! ;c)
person Estrilda
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I just love this story. It is so witty. A perfect grown up personality for our favorite Griffy witch. Thanks - Oh and update early and often - Please!
person jenbachand
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:) I\'d like to catch a little Slytherin Sex. Maybe it could be bottled & sold for ginger haired bad lovers? Love tshe she sent the pensieve on to him. :) Thanks for the update!

Jen :)
person MissCrystalix
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooo! please update soon!!!
person Skjeve
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, for the love of... WRITE the Ginny/Lucius bit! I love a view of him that isn\'t entirely villainous. *g* And he\'s -pretty- besides. Don\'t think of it as infidelity to Severus, think of it as simply expanding your understanding of the Death Eather psyche. Psychosis. Whatever. It can only lead to betthinghings with the Potions Master.

-Crooked
person Jenny
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
But what is there to say? You already know I think it\'s great!!

Mind, I don\'ink ink it\'s a *torrid* day Ginny\'s having at work ... definitions from dictionary.com: \"1. Parched with the heat of the sun; intensely hot; 2. Scorching; burning: the torrid noonday sun; 3. Passionate; ardent: a torrid love scene; 4. Hurried; rapid: set a torrid pace; torrid economic growth.\"

In fiction, the third use is most common ...

Yes, I\'d like to see the Ginny/Lucius story - and the Ron/Pansy one. I\'d be delighted to see her training him up, and I\'m sure you can make an excellent job of it. In the circumstances, infidelity to Severus is definitely forgiveable.
person Amanda
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shiv, this story is great! I was thrilled to come home today to another chappie.

Now comes the begging: PLEASE write the Ginny/Lucius story! You make them out to be incredibly interesting (to say the least), and the two together would be fantastic.

Thanks for writing!

Amanda
person kate
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thank you for giving Severus -- and us -- a present early! I got to read two chapters at once. I\'m so happy I won\'t even whine about the 2nd chapter not being longer, since it\'s still so well-written with such a high snark factor as to make it eminentljoyajoyable. Do carry on!
person AlphaRyoko
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
we had never got to the getting dressed before we go to bed so we can get undressed again stage in the relationship and were stuck at the clothes off now! then bed / sofa / floor / wall stage of relationship.

*spits tea all over monitor*

Too funny! I\'m going to die from the funny! It\'s too much!!!

More, please.
person MaddyRiddle
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, I like it!
I read you\'re thinking of writing a Lucius/Ginny fic... please do, I would love to read more about the Lucius you wrote in here (always read him as bastard number one and need to change mind a little). ;)