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by Shiv5468

person ShagsTheDustmop
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mmm... chocolate...
Definitely DO NOT put her back with Ron because no one should be sentenced to bad sex ;)
person tamargrl
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say, I chose not to read this story for a while because I was turned off by references to Hermione and Lucius, but now that I have given in to curiousity I am infintely pleased to have done so. This is hot stuff. Though the engagment feels a little early, I can fogive that in light of really well written smut. And funny, witty Hermione. Love how Slytherinzed she\'s becoming. (I agree, it must be contagious.)
Do keep up the good work. Oh, and bring on the smut!
person Jenny
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Re Narcissa - ow!! But thank you for telling me.

Re Torrid - delighted to hear it! Hadn\'t heard that usage before.

Glad to see Severus isn\'t *all* putty-ish. ;)

Nice chapters. :)
person gthistle
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Re: announcement of new chapter, it\'s totally fine that not every chapter is smut-centric. Good grief. :) I particularly liked the title\'s subtextual nod to the handcuffs (temporarily sub!Severus is emancipated).
person Trix
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You write so well! PLease say you\'re going to write up meeting the parents? Oh please please please please.
person Hawklaw
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more! Not just the smut (although I\'m really enjoying the hell out of it.) The story is great, and I do the dance of happiness anytime I see a new chapter up.
person nesscafe
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehe! Saucy witch! What a great idea sending the pensive to him so he can keep warm! I love this story! Update some more! Pretty please!!!!
person CherryBerry
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope you do decide to write a Lucius x Ginny fic! That would be fantastic!!!!!
person Skjeve
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More! Moremoremoremoremoremoremore!

Safe to say I rather liked it ;)

-Crooked
person k8gsmith
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"Must be boring to be a boy and not allowed to do that sort of thing.\" I thinkt sut sums it up perfectly! What a joy this has been to read. It\'s never going to end, right? Please?