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for Dirty deeds

by Shiv5468

person Estrilda
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No Ron, please! I have reviewed and even begged, so it\'s time for the holiday wish list. Please Shiv, can\'t you do snarky, witty Snape and not wait 10 Chapters for more lemons?
person Joanna
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. You have excellent characterization, a sardonic wit, and all the smut I could ever want. Please don\'t put her back together with Ron... I think I\'d cry! Please keep updating frequently, you have a faithful reader in me.
person Jean Lamb
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Frederick\'s of Hollywood sells some very nice different-flavored spreads (although I found the chocolate a tad dry; Hershey\'s syrup seems to work better, at least in my opinion. Smucker\'s Strawberry Preserves are also nice. Especially since without Cleaning Charms, one always needs a bath afterwards).

Oh, and excellent chapter by the way!
person Kait
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
She\'d hex you, yes....and so would I. Bloody hell! Kait
person WendyNat
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, even without the smut :). I love the journal style writing, I love being in Hermione\'s thoughts, I love the humor... I\'m a fangirl! Update as soon as possible
person WendyNat
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter!! Loved the chocolate sauce and handcuffs... mmmm. I just love this fic!! Update soon!
person nesscafe
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee! Smut or not I still love this story! The humorus workings of Hermione\'s mind writen by you are just too amusing to pass up! I look forward to every update! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!
person Colleen
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hermione\'s right. He\'s been so long with out clothes (They both have.) that we\'ve missed the regular sexiness. I love this fic.
person Jenny
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It just isn\'t worth risking, Shiv. And besides, poor Pansy ...

The chapter was worth reading even without smut - although depressingly short. This may be just as well, though, considering how late it is and all ...
person Michelline
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damned right Hermione would hex you if you tried to get her back with Ron. Evil thoughts... This was a good chapter. I love the way you write... Giggles abound... Even when I\'ve spent the weekend sick in bed. Thank god for laptops!