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i really really like this stroy i cant wait to start the sequel thank you for a great story ..
angel

Hello,

Its taken me quite sometime to send you a review but let me say this. I love this story! I\'ve read the whole thing and its completely awesome. Very nearly an X-rated Bridget Jones, good job! I can\'t wait for the sequels!
Babette

The remark about Lucious having \"this wistful, dare I say it, romantic hope that one day he would meet the woman of his dreams who would promptly chain him to the bed and make him call her mistress\" had me laughing out loud for good five minutes - good thing I was reading it at home.
Great writing - very Bridget-Jonesy - but I guess that was the idea.

I just read all of \'Dirty Deeds\'.........FUCK YEAH!!! THAT WAS BLOODY AWESOME!!!! I can\'t wait for the sequel!! You are so briliant!!! Love you!!!

I have to say that I have been enjoying the story. But one thing has been getting on my nerves. Not-so-little Severus? You couldn't have her say cock or dick or assorted other names, but you have her fucking three different men in the story? Come on! She couldn't even say the word penis? Tool? Thingy? LOL! But really, if you can't have your characters say the name the rod they're fucking for over several chapters and three men, NC-17 may not be a rating you personally feel at ease with and you might think of writing something else.

Just read all 40 chapters, fantastic... loved the diary format, something a little different :)

Thoroughly enjoyed it. HP not really my thing, nor adult stuff really, but was pointed here by a mate and Really, really enjoyed reading :)

I asked people on the Dark Sarcasm Yahoo group for suggestions for stories to cheer me up since England were doing so badly in Euro2004 and someone suggested your stories. (Just as well since England then went from bad to worse). I\'ve no idea why I haven\'t come across them before. Brilliant! I\'m halfway through Dirty Deeds and it is great. I wish I could stay up all night reading but I\'m getting cross-eyed. But I shall be back for more!

Bugger (on a stick) half of post got lost.

Read this through ALL in one sitting and want to thank you for constant stream of delightful moments. The whole \'dog training\' metaphor was so bloody funny, and you deal with fanfic/sexgod Severus cliches so nicely. It\'s also refreshing to see Dumbledore treated, quite simply, as a selfish prat of the first order. Y\'know, I don\'t think our Jo\'s even considered him as having wronged and manipulated Harry (which you dealt with more seriously in other fics - in fact, the only one not read now is the angsty one, cos it looked like Pawn to Queen scenario with a really nasty Severus who takes advantage of the \'rescue through sex\' in a quite horrible way - call me sentimental, but can\'t cope with genuinely evil Sevs. )

Thanks again for perfect stess relief at end of gruelling day. (grr - I get, by writing charming letter in french, my university\'s prospected campus building the great JEAN NOUVEL on a fucking plate and what do they do? Turn him down in favour of some crappy local firm.)

Ah, I see you\'ve also ome up with magical solution to the disparity-in-height-renders-ubiquitous shag-up-against-the-filing-cabinet-not-as-easy-at-it-looks problem. (You know, I really hadn\'t read this when I wrote the \'Gift to Virgins\' vignette, though i imagine your solution appears in the first chapter on levitation in \'A Dsocours of Luvve\'s Expressiown\'.

This is REALLY enjoyable. I like the Bridget Jones \'Look, no pronouns\' style.