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for Old Enemies New Loves

by zephyrs1desire

person PotionsPet
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job on this fic..btw in chapter 4 when Ginny Stunned Neville when he tried to kill Draco, you mentioned that the stunner she cast was a green beam of light, but Stupify sends out a RED beam..just thought I\'d let you know...I\'m a bit of an obsesive when it comes to all things from the HP books..*grins*


PotionsPet
person Annibug
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
/Someday he would get the Weasleys to agree to let him help them the next time they remodeled./ - That is so dead on Malfoy! Loved it, and it made me smile. Harry stunning Ron was rather funny too.

Awww, they\'re in love. How sweet. How will the Weasley\'s respond? I\'m off to find out!
person Annibug
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! And they lived happily ever after, right? That\'s how I like my stories to end anyway. I\'m a sucker for fluff especially after angstiness.

Great job and congratulations on finishing.
person GrrArrg
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Sniff* What a lovely ending!!

Can\'t wait for the next one!!

Kisses
GrrArrg
person Brian
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
they stilt lit like kids don\'t they? Haven\'t even gotten around to using eachother\'s first names. good story though. I like the idea.
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved the exchange between Harry, Ron and Draco!!
But why is Harry really still alone?
And poor Draco, getting the door shut in his face!!
Love it and can\'t wait for the rest of this and all the others!!
Kisses
GrrArrg
person Megan Andres
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay... here\'s a couple of plot bunnies.

1. Why has Harry never dated? Has he been trying to build a good life in order to woo Virginia? Will he fight Draco for her attentions? (Something along those lines.)
2. Can Draco prove to the Weasleys that he really loves Virginia? With Hermione\'s help, can he be free to love the woman of his dreams?
3. Make a ter ter ten years from now. How will things be between Virginia and Draco then? (This would be a last resort as it would kind of be an ending thing no matter how you wrote it.)

Hope this helps.

PS. I loved what Draco said at the very end of the 10th chapter. I think it shows the exasperation and desperation he feels with the situation.
person GrrArrg
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You\'re back!!
Fab chapter darling, I have always thought that Draco will end up spying for the light, and falling for Ginny
More soon plz
Kisses
GrrGrr
person GrrArrg
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wheeewwww!!!

Somebody throw a bucket of cold water over me!! (Although this probably how I got the flu!!)

Hot Damn woman, I it it back, you are not a goddess, you are a hot smutty goddess!!

And for the record, I agree that Draco is a close second to Severus in the \"hot stuff\" category!

More soon plz

Kisses
GrrArrg
person Annibug
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You did a fantastic job with the smut. I\'m very jealous because I\'ve just started my own D/G story at FF and am nervous about the upcoming smut scene. I may have to post it here depending on how graphic it gets. I\'ve never written one before and it\'s a tad bit intimidating so I applaud your bravery and talent. Nicely done and thanks for the alert email.