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Harry Potter › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
1
Views:
1,258
Reviews:
5
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
A Better Answer
WARNING: Heyyyyyyy...... Okay, before you read this, know that it is GAY PORN with absolutely no plot whatsoever. I\'m just horny. I repeat, this is about A MAN FUCKING ANOTHER MAN IN THE ASS PART so if you don\'t like that, please PLEASE don\'t read it, then flame me, telling me how shocked you are and that I\'m sick. If you do that, then you\'ll only be proving your own stupidity.
Anyway, this is Severus/Barty Crouch Jr. Yes, I know I have a habit of making unlikely pairings, but that\'s what I like. This takes place way back when Barty Jr. was a student in Hogwarts, and Severus was his classmate. Severus is a year older than him in this fic. The song, \"The Space Between\" by the Dave Matthews Band was kind of my muse for this fic, so many of the words are before and after the fic starts. You can skip them if you like, but I just think they\'re pretty and they remind me of this pairing, kind of. There we go. Now that that\'s all cleared up, I hope you still read this story, and I really hope you review it.
P.S. - This is my first ass fucking and cock sucking scene, so please go easy on me.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter = Not Mine
A Better Answer
By Marie Goos
We’re strange allies
With warring hearts
What a wild eyed beast you be
The space between
The wicked lies we tell that hope to keep us safe from the pain
Look at us spinning out in the madness of a rollercoaster
You know you went off like the devil in the church
In the middle of a crowded room
All we can do my love
Is hope we don’t take this ship down
The space between
Where you smile and hide
That’s where you’ll find me if I get to go
The space between
The bullets in our fire fight
Is where I’ll be hiding waiting for you
The rain that falls
Splashed in your heart
Ran like sadness down the window into your room
~The Space Between, By the Dave Matthews Band
The sky was grey and dull, and no one else was outside. It was too gloomy a day to be outside, unless one had some ulterior motive. Severus Snape and Bartemius Crouch Jr. were two such people. They sat on the far side of the lake, letting the cool wind whip their hair about and bite t ski skin, watching the sky as the greyness of it shifted subtley back and forth. \"Nice day,\" Bartemius muttered softly.
\"What are we doing out here?\" Severus asked suddenly. \"Why are we here, Barty?\"
\"Because it\'s a nice day,\" Barty answered evasively, running his fingers through the moist grass.
\"You have to give me a better answer than that,\" Severus insisted. Instead of replying with words, Barty leaned over and kissed Severus softly on the lips. Severus stiffened slightly, then relaxed and eventually returned the kiss. Barty pulled away, his cheeks slightly flushed and his freckles pronounced a bit more than usual. The quiet Hufflepuff timidly reached forward and ran his hand through Severus\'s hair, his eyes holding admiration and desire. Severus slowly wrapped his arms around Barty, pulling him close and kissing him. Barty held Severus\'s head with one hand and placed the other on his inner thigh. Severus deepened the kiss, pushing his tongue into the other boy\'s mouth and exploring it with great relish. Barty began wrestling Severus\'s tongue with his own in a heated dance of passion, a fight for dominance. As he did, Barty slid his hand up Severus\'s inner thigh and gripped his crotch. Severus moaned softly, breaking his passionate contact with Barty\'s mouth to explore other desirable areas. He kissed and nibbled the soft pale skin on his partner\'s neck as he began to unfasten Barty\'s robes. Soon Barty\'s chest was exposed and Severus immediately began to explore it with kisses and licks, nibbling here and there. He sucked each nipple softly, eliciting a moan from their owner. Severus made it down to his navel, gently blowing on it, then delicately dipping his tongue inside, enjoyably stimulating some long since forgotten nerves. Then, Barty pulled Severus up by his robes and kissed him again, and this time it was Severus who was being undressed.
Barty pushed him down onto his back and licked from his navel all the way up to his neck in one long stroke, then bit down hard. Severus gasped and dug his nails into his lover\'s back so hard that he could feel the skin break. Barty moaned with pleasure and nibbled gently on Severus\'s ear, ignoring the mark he\'d left on his neck, which blood was now trickling from. \"What are you, a vampire?\" Severus asked breathlessly. In response, Barty leaned down and licked up the blood from the wound, swallowing every last drop. Severus, always an impatient young man, was getting tired of foreplay, so he rolled over on top of Barty and took off his pants, then slid the plain white briefs off of his target, leaving him naked and susceptible to any kinky deed. Severus immediately focused on the large reddish erection and gripped the scrotum that hung beneath it. Barty moaned again, not being one for words, and dug his fingers into the slippery grass, then the hard earth beneath it. Severus began kissing at the base, reveling in Barty\'s throaty vocals as he did so. He bit gently and Barty dug his finger into his raven black hair, obviously enjoying the sensation. Severus ran his tongue slowly up to the tip, the back down again, and it was all Barty could do to keep from screaming out for more. Severus trailed kisses back up to the tip of Barty\'s penis, then licked off the precum that was congregating there and gently kissed the tip. He massaged Barty\'s balls as he took the entire length of his erection into his mouth and began moving up and down.
He gripped Barty\'s cock with his other hand just below his mouth and began moving his tongue in circles as he moved, and Barty bucked and moaned from the barrage of sensations. He could feel his orgasm building and tried to hold it back to prolong the feeling, but he couldn\'t keep from release for long and with a harsh groan he orgasmed into his lover\'s mouth. Severus swallowed every last drop of the cum, then ran his tongue over Barty\'s softening cock to pick up anything he might have missed.
Now eager to relieve his own throbbing arousal, Severus kissed Barty deeply, then turned him over onto his stomach. Barty complied, nearly trembling in anticipation of what he knew was to come. Slowly Severus licked three of his fingers, then spread Barty\'s legs and slid one into the younger boy\'s nice, tight ass. Barty moved into Severus\'s touch, clenching his teeth and gasping with pleasure. Severus inserted a second finger, and then a third, his erection tingling in his excitement. Barty\'s softened cock was already beginning to harden again as he got up on all fours. Severus deftly replaced his fingers with his hard penis, moaning as he felt the hot tightness close around his manhood. He pulled almost all the way out, then pushed back in, moaning as his once neglected erection was surrounded with pleasure. He started off in a slow rhythm at first, making sure to be gentle, but it soon became apparent that gentle was definitely not what Barty wanted, so Severus began pumping harder, quickening his rhythm. \"Spank me,\" Barty moaned passionately. Severus smiled at the kinkiness of his partner, and slapped his rear hard, the smacking sound of flesh on flesh ringing through the air. \"Again,\" Barty pleaded. Severus spanked him again, then a third time, a red mark sprouting on Barty\'s ass.
Severus began moving quicker, thrusting his hips forth as hard as he could manage, his scrotum slapping into his lover\'s flesh. Barty moaned loudly, moving with Severus, and soon the were sharing the same motion. Severus leaned over and started stroking Barty\'s new erection, causing Barty to shiver and moan all the louder in his pleasure. There was a blinding flash in the sky as Severus came, moaning Barty\'s name as he spilled his seed into him, but not slowing the movement of his hand. Several moments passed before the loud rumbling of thunder drowned out Barty\'s moaning as he came for the second time, his seed spreading across the grass. Droplets of rain began pouring down, and by the time Barty and Severus hit the ground it was past drizzling and the rain was close to pouring, torrentially. The two spooned, still joined, and panted happily as their arousal slipped away, leaving behind only comfort and a satisfying sense of completion.
Breathing heavily, Barty opened his mouth and hesitated, then spoke over the pounding of the rain hitting the ground. \"Is that a good enough answer for you?\" Severus thought a minute.
\"Nope,\" he replied. \"I guess you\'ll just have to try again.\"
The space between
Our wicked lies is
The hope to keep safe from pain
Take my hand
Cause we’re walking out of here
Right out of here
Is all we need dear
The space between
What\'s wrong and right
Is where you\'ll find me hiding waiting for you
The space between
Your heart and mine
Is the space we’ll fill with time
~The Space Between, By the Dave Matthews Band
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Well, that\'s it. How did you like it? Please tell me. I had fun writing it, and I love this pairing with all my heart, though I don\'t recall ever seeing it before. That\'s part of why I did it, of course... because there probably isn\'t any other fic of this pairing, at least not one that\'s easy to find. Besides, I love Barty Crouch Jr. so much!!!!! I was so sad and angry when the Dementor sucked out his soul!!!! YoY WAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! Oh well... Well, please review this, and show me that you care.
Anyway, this is Severus/Barty Crouch Jr. Yes, I know I have a habit of making unlikely pairings, but that\'s what I like. This takes place way back when Barty Jr. was a student in Hogwarts, and Severus was his classmate. Severus is a year older than him in this fic. The song, \"The Space Between\" by the Dave Matthews Band was kind of my muse for this fic, so many of the words are before and after the fic starts. You can skip them if you like, but I just think they\'re pretty and they remind me of this pairing, kind of. There we go. Now that that\'s all cleared up, I hope you still read this story, and I really hope you review it.
P.S. - This is my first ass fucking and cock sucking scene, so please go easy on me.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter = Not Mine
A Better Answer
By Marie Goos
We’re strange allies
With warring hearts
What a wild eyed beast you be
The space between
The wicked lies we tell that hope to keep us safe from the pain
Look at us spinning out in the madness of a rollercoaster
You know you went off like the devil in the church
In the middle of a crowded room
All we can do my love
Is hope we don’t take this ship down
The space between
Where you smile and hide
That’s where you’ll find me if I get to go
The space between
The bullets in our fire fight
Is where I’ll be hiding waiting for you
The rain that falls
Splashed in your heart
Ran like sadness down the window into your room
~The Space Between, By the Dave Matthews Band
The sky was grey and dull, and no one else was outside. It was too gloomy a day to be outside, unless one had some ulterior motive. Severus Snape and Bartemius Crouch Jr. were two such people. They sat on the far side of the lake, letting the cool wind whip their hair about and bite t ski skin, watching the sky as the greyness of it shifted subtley back and forth. \"Nice day,\" Bartemius muttered softly.
\"What are we doing out here?\" Severus asked suddenly. \"Why are we here, Barty?\"
\"Because it\'s a nice day,\" Barty answered evasively, running his fingers through the moist grass.
\"You have to give me a better answer than that,\" Severus insisted. Instead of replying with words, Barty leaned over and kissed Severus softly on the lips. Severus stiffened slightly, then relaxed and eventually returned the kiss. Barty pulled away, his cheeks slightly flushed and his freckles pronounced a bit more than usual. The quiet Hufflepuff timidly reached forward and ran his hand through Severus\'s hair, his eyes holding admiration and desire. Severus slowly wrapped his arms around Barty, pulling him close and kissing him. Barty held Severus\'s head with one hand and placed the other on his inner thigh. Severus deepened the kiss, pushing his tongue into the other boy\'s mouth and exploring it with great relish. Barty began wrestling Severus\'s tongue with his own in a heated dance of passion, a fight for dominance. As he did, Barty slid his hand up Severus\'s inner thigh and gripped his crotch. Severus moaned softly, breaking his passionate contact with Barty\'s mouth to explore other desirable areas. He kissed and nibbled the soft pale skin on his partner\'s neck as he began to unfasten Barty\'s robes. Soon Barty\'s chest was exposed and Severus immediately began to explore it with kisses and licks, nibbling here and there. He sucked each nipple softly, eliciting a moan from their owner. Severus made it down to his navel, gently blowing on it, then delicately dipping his tongue inside, enjoyably stimulating some long since forgotten nerves. Then, Barty pulled Severus up by his robes and kissed him again, and this time it was Severus who was being undressed.
Barty pushed him down onto his back and licked from his navel all the way up to his neck in one long stroke, then bit down hard. Severus gasped and dug his nails into his lover\'s back so hard that he could feel the skin break. Barty moaned with pleasure and nibbled gently on Severus\'s ear, ignoring the mark he\'d left on his neck, which blood was now trickling from. \"What are you, a vampire?\" Severus asked breathlessly. In response, Barty leaned down and licked up the blood from the wound, swallowing every last drop. Severus, always an impatient young man, was getting tired of foreplay, so he rolled over on top of Barty and took off his pants, then slid the plain white briefs off of his target, leaving him naked and susceptible to any kinky deed. Severus immediately focused on the large reddish erection and gripped the scrotum that hung beneath it. Barty moaned again, not being one for words, and dug his fingers into the slippery grass, then the hard earth beneath it. Severus began kissing at the base, reveling in Barty\'s throaty vocals as he did so. He bit gently and Barty dug his finger into his raven black hair, obviously enjoying the sensation. Severus ran his tongue slowly up to the tip, the back down again, and it was all Barty could do to keep from screaming out for more. Severus trailed kisses back up to the tip of Barty\'s penis, then licked off the precum that was congregating there and gently kissed the tip. He massaged Barty\'s balls as he took the entire length of his erection into his mouth and began moving up and down.
He gripped Barty\'s cock with his other hand just below his mouth and began moving his tongue in circles as he moved, and Barty bucked and moaned from the barrage of sensations. He could feel his orgasm building and tried to hold it back to prolong the feeling, but he couldn\'t keep from release for long and with a harsh groan he orgasmed into his lover\'s mouth. Severus swallowed every last drop of the cum, then ran his tongue over Barty\'s softening cock to pick up anything he might have missed.
Now eager to relieve his own throbbing arousal, Severus kissed Barty deeply, then turned him over onto his stomach. Barty complied, nearly trembling in anticipation of what he knew was to come. Slowly Severus licked three of his fingers, then spread Barty\'s legs and slid one into the younger boy\'s nice, tight ass. Barty moved into Severus\'s touch, clenching his teeth and gasping with pleasure. Severus inserted a second finger, and then a third, his erection tingling in his excitement. Barty\'s softened cock was already beginning to harden again as he got up on all fours. Severus deftly replaced his fingers with his hard penis, moaning as he felt the hot tightness close around his manhood. He pulled almost all the way out, then pushed back in, moaning as his once neglected erection was surrounded with pleasure. He started off in a slow rhythm at first, making sure to be gentle, but it soon became apparent that gentle was definitely not what Barty wanted, so Severus began pumping harder, quickening his rhythm. \"Spank me,\" Barty moaned passionately. Severus smiled at the kinkiness of his partner, and slapped his rear hard, the smacking sound of flesh on flesh ringing through the air. \"Again,\" Barty pleaded. Severus spanked him again, then a third time, a red mark sprouting on Barty\'s ass.
Severus began moving quicker, thrusting his hips forth as hard as he could manage, his scrotum slapping into his lover\'s flesh. Barty moaned loudly, moving with Severus, and soon the were sharing the same motion. Severus leaned over and started stroking Barty\'s new erection, causing Barty to shiver and moan all the louder in his pleasure. There was a blinding flash in the sky as Severus came, moaning Barty\'s name as he spilled his seed into him, but not slowing the movement of his hand. Several moments passed before the loud rumbling of thunder drowned out Barty\'s moaning as he came for the second time, his seed spreading across the grass. Droplets of rain began pouring down, and by the time Barty and Severus hit the ground it was past drizzling and the rain was close to pouring, torrentially. The two spooned, still joined, and panted happily as their arousal slipped away, leaving behind only comfort and a satisfying sense of completion.
Breathing heavily, Barty opened his mouth and hesitated, then spoke over the pounding of the rain hitting the ground. \"Is that a good enough answer for you?\" Severus thought a minute.
\"Nope,\" he replied. \"I guess you\'ll just have to try again.\"
The space between
Our wicked lies is
The hope to keep safe from pain
Take my hand
Cause we’re walking out of here
Right out of here
Is all we need dear
The space between
What\'s wrong and right
Is where you\'ll find me hiding waiting for you
The space between
Your heart and mine
Is the space we’ll fill with time
~The Space Between, By the Dave Matthews Band
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Well, that\'s it. How did you like it? Please tell me. I had fun writing it, and I love this pairing with all my heart, though I don\'t recall ever seeing it before. That\'s part of why I did it, of course... because there probably isn\'t any other fic of this pairing, at least not one that\'s easy to find. Besides, I love Barty Crouch Jr. so much!!!!! I was so sad and angry when the Dementor sucked out his soul!!!! YoY WAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! Oh well... Well, please review this, and show me that you care.