Untouchable
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Harry Potter › Slash - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
1
Views:
2,787
Reviews:
1
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
The Beginning
Authors: Pibby
Rating: R
Pairings: Harry/Draco, and mentions of Ron/Hermione
Disclaimer: I don’t own Harry Potter or any of its characters, Although, Elle Michaels Serene Yugure and others you dont recognize belong to me and my friend.
A/N#1: This chapter is when Harry didn’t know anything about the magic world. Later the story will take place in Hogwarts at their fifth year. This story its being written by 2 people, Pibby(me) and Eda(my friend), more me than my friend but anyways. Hope you like. When the text is like /blab/ it means what they’re thinkin. I write this a long time ago so you'll see changes in the writing from chapter to chapter. Anywways Chapter one of Untouchable.
Enjoy!
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Chapter 1: The Beginning
“Where is she?” he asked himself. She was supposed to meet her best friend at his house and then go to the movies. At that moment he heard the bell ring.
“About time, where were you?”
“Sorry Draco, I was talking to a friend. I hope you don’t mind but I invited her and her boyfriend to come with us” Said the girl.
“It’s ok, now lets go before my father comes back” Draco said as he was closing the door and he left with a girl, Serene.
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“Harry, wanna go out to the movies?”
“Yeah ok, let me get ready ok?”
“Ok I’ll wait for you there; I’ll be waiting for a friend too”
“Ok, Bye Elle” He gave her a small kiss and with that she left.
=At the Movies=
“I wonder where she is.” Serene said looking around
“And you expect me to know? said Draco
“Draco! Don’t be silly, it’s just that she’s late…”
“Harry there they are! Come on!” Said Elle walking towards Serene
“Ok, I'm coming”
“Elle Hey, how are you?” Serene said
“Hey Serene, I’m fine thanks, what are we gonna see?”
“I want something scary…” Harry said looking at the movie program.
“My thoughts exactly, you’re Harry right?”
“Yeah, and you’re Serene right?”
“Yeah”
“And you are?” Harry said looking at the boy next to Serene.
“I'm Draco”
“Nice to meet you Draco I'm Harry”
Harry and Draco stare at each other. Harry at the moment had a girlfriend Elle and Draco had a “date” his best friend Serene. Inside at the movie Serene was in the corner, Draco sitting next to her, Harry next to Draco and Elle next to Harry.
---Elle’s P.O.V.-----
We were watching a scary movie like we all agreed and Harry being next to Draco he got scared
and grabbed his hand. They looked at each other again and blushed. I saw this and gave Draco this I’m-gonna-kill-you-look. Serene looked at me then at Draco and Harry who still had their hands together. I looked badly at Harry (because he was my boyfriend and all) then at Draco and looked confused at Serene. I drag Harry out of the movie. I couldn’t take it anymore.
“Harry what the hell was that all about? Are you gay?”
“No I’m not. I don’t think so, but he is cute and his hand felt so good... and...NO! NO I'm not.
Serene took Draco into a bathroom so they could talk (she scared everyone out of there)
“Draco you alright?”
“I think so”
“...You like him don’t you? And don’t say you don’t because I know you, and I know you do like him...”
“Yeah I like him, he’s cute” Draco said while blushing
“Oh Draco I’ll help you get him even if I have to kick my friend away from him.” Serene starts laughing, she would hurt her, she’s her friend, but Draco meant a lot more to Serene than Elle did.
Outside with Elle and Harry they were still talking. Elle trying to understand or believe what Harry said
/Harry really gay or not? Is he both, a bisexual? panicking in thoughts… oh my, oh my, oh my, oh my, my boyfriend’s a bisexual, A BISEXUAL…this cant be, this cant be I mean we where happy.../
Stopping herself as she saw Draco and Serene coming…
We walked outside and Serene saw Elle panicking… “What the hell is wrong with her?”
Draco really calm walk to us and as soon as he sees Harry he becomes “jelly” again and Harry stares at him again.
“Harry, Harry!?!?”
Harry doesnt answer because he's to busy drooling.
“Harry, HARRY?!? Wake up…” snapping her fingers at his face
/That boy sure is hot!! That blond hair, that pale skin, oh so HOT!!/ *dreamy face*
“Harry?!?” Elle dragged Harry away. “Harry tell me the truth… I know that if this “relationship” can be true you must be honest with me…*takes a breath* are you gay?”
“To be honest with you… I don’t know… maybe I mean he’s so cute and you are too but ...I’m more interested in him… I’m sorry…?”
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A/N: Like I said before this is the first chapter of the first fanfic I wrote, even if I had a little help, bring new and all... you know. Now that I read this again (which I changed the original authors note since I’m putting it now here) It seems so... out of the story XD but anyways, I’m not so happy with the old chapters but that doesn’t mean I’m gonna start re-writing the whole first chapters. Anyways next chapter I'll put it soon, ok well as soon as I can find them in my computer.
Eda/N: Elle is being a bitch, but I already made that clear…
And remember to Review! It’s what keeps us writing even if you thought we could use a little (or a lot) help put it in a review so we can improve and you will like it more. I really don’t mind criticism, constructive or pointless, just let me know what you like and don’t like, and remember, I wrote this with my friend about a year ago and I still write and my writing changes so... the emotion of the story changes as well. Review!
Rating: R
Pairings: Harry/Draco, and mentions of Ron/Hermione
Disclaimer: I don’t own Harry Potter or any of its characters, Although, Elle Michaels Serene Yugure and others you dont recognize belong to me and my friend.
A/N#1: This chapter is when Harry didn’t know anything about the magic world. Later the story will take place in Hogwarts at their fifth year. This story its being written by 2 people, Pibby(me) and Eda(my friend), more me than my friend but anyways. Hope you like. When the text is like /blab/ it means what they’re thinkin. I write this a long time ago so you'll see changes in the writing from chapter to chapter. Anywways Chapter one of Untouchable.
Enjoy!
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Chapter 1: The Beginning
“Where is she?” he asked himself. She was supposed to meet her best friend at his house and then go to the movies. At that moment he heard the bell ring.
“About time, where were you?”
“Sorry Draco, I was talking to a friend. I hope you don’t mind but I invited her and her boyfriend to come with us” Said the girl.
“It’s ok, now lets go before my father comes back” Draco said as he was closing the door and he left with a girl, Serene.
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“Harry, wanna go out to the movies?”
“Yeah ok, let me get ready ok?”
“Ok I’ll wait for you there; I’ll be waiting for a friend too”
“Ok, Bye Elle” He gave her a small kiss and with that she left.
=At the Movies=
“I wonder where she is.” Serene said looking around
“And you expect me to know? said Draco
“Draco! Don’t be silly, it’s just that she’s late…”
“Harry there they are! Come on!” Said Elle walking towards Serene
“Ok, I'm coming”
“Elle Hey, how are you?” Serene said
“Hey Serene, I’m fine thanks, what are we gonna see?”
“I want something scary…” Harry said looking at the movie program.
“My thoughts exactly, you’re Harry right?”
“Yeah, and you’re Serene right?”
“Yeah”
“And you are?” Harry said looking at the boy next to Serene.
“I'm Draco”
“Nice to meet you Draco I'm Harry”
Harry and Draco stare at each other. Harry at the moment had a girlfriend Elle and Draco had a “date” his best friend Serene. Inside at the movie Serene was in the corner, Draco sitting next to her, Harry next to Draco and Elle next to Harry.
---Elle’s P.O.V.-----
We were watching a scary movie like we all agreed and Harry being next to Draco he got scared
and grabbed his hand. They looked at each other again and blushed. I saw this and gave Draco this I’m-gonna-kill-you-look. Serene looked at me then at Draco and Harry who still had their hands together. I looked badly at Harry (because he was my boyfriend and all) then at Draco and looked confused at Serene. I drag Harry out of the movie. I couldn’t take it anymore.
“Harry what the hell was that all about? Are you gay?”
“No I’m not. I don’t think so, but he is cute and his hand felt so good... and...NO! NO I'm not.
Serene took Draco into a bathroom so they could talk (she scared everyone out of there)
“Draco you alright?”
“I think so”
“...You like him don’t you? And don’t say you don’t because I know you, and I know you do like him...”
“Yeah I like him, he’s cute” Draco said while blushing
“Oh Draco I’ll help you get him even if I have to kick my friend away from him.” Serene starts laughing, she would hurt her, she’s her friend, but Draco meant a lot more to Serene than Elle did.
Outside with Elle and Harry they were still talking. Elle trying to understand or believe what Harry said
/Harry really gay or not? Is he both, a bisexual? panicking in thoughts… oh my, oh my, oh my, oh my, my boyfriend’s a bisexual, A BISEXUAL…this cant be, this cant be I mean we where happy.../
Stopping herself as she saw Draco and Serene coming…
We walked outside and Serene saw Elle panicking… “What the hell is wrong with her?”
Draco really calm walk to us and as soon as he sees Harry he becomes “jelly” again and Harry stares at him again.
“Harry, Harry!?!?”
Harry doesnt answer because he's to busy drooling.
“Harry, HARRY?!? Wake up…” snapping her fingers at his face
/That boy sure is hot!! That blond hair, that pale skin, oh so HOT!!/ *dreamy face*
“Harry?!?” Elle dragged Harry away. “Harry tell me the truth… I know that if this “relationship” can be true you must be honest with me…*takes a breath* are you gay?”
“To be honest with you… I don’t know… maybe I mean he’s so cute and you are too but ...I’m more interested in him… I’m sorry…?”
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A/N: Like I said before this is the first chapter of the first fanfic I wrote, even if I had a little help, bring new and all... you know. Now that I read this again (which I changed the original authors note since I’m putting it now here) It seems so... out of the story XD but anyways, I’m not so happy with the old chapters but that doesn’t mean I’m gonna start re-writing the whole first chapters. Anyways next chapter I'll put it soon, ok well as soon as I can find them in my computer.
Eda/N: Elle is being a bitch, but I already made that clear…
And remember to Review! It’s what keeps us writing even if you thought we could use a little (or a lot) help put it in a review so we can improve and you will like it more. I really don’t mind criticism, constructive or pointless, just let me know what you like and don’t like, and remember, I wrote this with my friend about a year ago and I still write and my writing changes so... the emotion of the story changes as well. Review!