Prefect Pair

I'm responding to the resent reviews on my story. I do understand why some are angry with my story. But like someone said the way I write my the story mine! I happen to be from Louisiana which is just about as south as you can get here in USA. I write the way I think which also happens to be the way I speak. The only British Writing I've ever come across that I read for fun was the Harry Potter series and sometimes I have no clue what their saying mean like Wotcher Harry (or however you spell it) for example..... I get that its a greeting and thats about it. I'm trying to keep the characters in their language and I honestly didn't even think about the Ya'll's before i got the reviews. Now I'm leaving them in there for spite and my own stubbornness. If you cant get past the ya'll pretend they aren't there or don't read my story. I wish I could appease everyone because I have actually enjoyed posting this story. Which is something I've never done I must have wrote 10 stories prior to this one but I deleted when i had finished them because I don't normally share my imagination with others its not something my family approves of. If i go back and change the dialects and the southern phrases the story would no longer be like it was in my imagination. I haven't even gone back and reread any of the chapters unless someone informs me of a conflict because once its wrote its wrote. If i went back and edited any more then what I do as I go along I'd be rewriting this or that and I'd lose the story I started out to write. I'm about half way through the story at this point I think. Once I'm done posting my complete story if anyone is interested in going back and making it more British English friendly I'd be more then happy to let that happen. I'd even like to see what someone else could add to my story at that point, but I would like that to wait until I have finished writing it. I wont change the way I write for pleasure just to appease strangers now if you were JK Rowlings then I might do it out of respect for the inspiration she has given me.


ps. I'm already thinking of what happenes next in the story but it will be a day or so before I'm ready to start typing it. And I'll be deleting one of my AN chapters so keep you eyes open for the new chapter. Goodnight I wish ya'll happy dreams and wonderful mornings