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By: Extraho
folder Harry Potter › Het - Male/Female
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 25
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Girl Talk

Ch 6. Girl Talk


Lilith was sore. Her husband was quite cross when he had retuned from the pub the day before, sadly his mood had lightened when he smelled her arousal. He had naturally mistaken her post-sex dampness for arousal for him.

Keith was sleeping beside her, a bit of drool seeping out from the corner of his mouth. Lilith shrugged her shoulders in disgust. She had to get out of bed and make the fat bastard’s breakfast. He wouldn’t wake in another half an hour, but making a full English breakfast was time consuming, at least the way he wanted it, and God forbid it being any different.

She made a long list of shores that she had to do before she left for the park. She felt a nervous flutter in her stomach. Lily’s father.

‘He’ll ask about Lily, everything about Lily.’ What did he want to achieve by talking to her?

She pushed the bacon around the frying pan, keeping it warm until Keith decided that he could bother to drag himself down the stairs. Finally the too familiar squeaks in the staircases cut into her ears. She piled his food on a plate and set it on the table.

“Good morning darling” she greeted

“Humph!” Keith grunted in return. He was not a morning person. He read non caringly through her to-do-list and is eyes stopped at 2 pm.

“What are you doing at two o’clock?”

“Grocery and household shopping, why do you ask, have I not written it on the to-do-list?”

“No you haven’t!” he barked

Lilith rolled her eyes and snapped the sheet of paper from him and clawed it on in block letters.

“There; now it’s on the list!”

“Don’t you get smart with me lass” he scowled at her. He dragged himself up from his chair and headed towards her. Lilith backed up against the oven, she reached behind her so she wouldn’t crash. Keith drew back his hand and slapped hard against the side of her head. Lilith saw black spots dancing in front of her eyes. Her hand touched the oven, as she reached for support and burned the skin in her palm. She jittered her teeth and hissed in pain. Keith sneered at her in disgust and headed up the stairs to get ready for work.

Lilith sighed in relief when he made his way out of the door. She had already finished most of the chores earlier in the week, so she decided just to do a superficial sweep. Keith would not notice anyway. He was either too pissed to care, or “slaving” over his work documents.

She was in desperate need of a shower. Having that pig’s touching her was enough to make her want to hurl, and usually she did just that. However, having him inside her, upon her, sweating and cumming on and in her, made her scrub her skin crimson-red and carefully rinse and soothe her soreness every morning. Lilith leaned her head on the shower wall, and let the warm water run along her tall and curvy feminine body. The creamy gel foamed under her light touches, trying to avoid rubbing the sore spots. She rinsed her hair and stepped out onto the cold bathroom floor. Huddling herself in a big fluffy towel, she dried herself off, but let her hair dry naturally. It brought out the waves and curls in her hair, she loved it that way. Keith, however, hated it, so she usually kept it straight.

Properly dried off and dressed she telephoned Jessica. They had been best friends since primary school. They had even attended the same boarding school until the year Jessica turned eleven, and then she had been transferred to a school up in the highlands in Scotland. They had kept contact through letters and during the holidays, but it was still hard to have her two year older sister in all but blood so far away.


In her own house a few blocks down Jessica herd her phone ringing. She groaned and dragged her self away from her steaming hot lousy exuse of a breakfast.


“Jessica speaking”

“Hey Jess, it’s Lilith. I wondered if you could look after Lily for a little while. I’ve got a lunch with an old friend.”

‘Old friend, uh? Well, well, well. Looks like the black haired Adonis has my baby sister on her knees.’ Jessica thought.

“Of course I’ll look after Lily, she so adorable. Do I know this old friend?”

“No, I don’t think so. We met a couple of years back, and he invited me for a meal.”

‘ I knew it!’ Jessica gave herself a mental pat in the back

“When are you leaving then?”

“Quarter past one, but could you come over now, because I really need to talk to someone, I’m so confused?”

“Sure hon. Just give me a few minutes.”

“Thank you. I’ve got eggs and bacon on the stove if you want some breakfast” Jessica shot a glance at her porridge and sighed.

“You save my life. I would be a scrawny wreck without you.”

“Don’t I know it.” Lilith chuckled at the other end.


Jessica was giddy in excitement by the time she made it to Lilith’s front door. She walked straight into kitchen where Lilith stood piling up a hearty portion of bacon onto two plates. She handed a plate to Jessica and headed for the living room.

Walking into the sitting area Jessica stiffened. The air was buzzing with energy, but Lilith didn’t seem to bothered about it.

‘Bloody hell! My baby sister got herself involved with a wizard. A powerful one too to be able to leave such a strong magical signature.’ She thought as she sniffed the air. ‘ ah, and a hint of yesterdays workout session as well.’ Now she was smirking. Jessica was a witch and a junior auror and her special talent was that she didn’t need a wand to pick up magical signatures.

Lilith saw the look on her face and blushed.

“Well, I need to tell you something…”

“Cut the crap and spill it. Who is that lovely Adonis I saw you in the horizontal tango with yesterday? Don’t even try to deny it!” as her words left her mouth Lilith’s face went almost purple in embarrassment.

“You saw us?”

“Oh yeah. Call me a perv but I could not tear my eyes away! So who was it?” she was practically bouncing on the couch in excitement.

“ItwasLilysdad.”

“I didn’t quite catch that love.” Lilith sighed and looked at Jessica.

“It was Lily’s father.” Jessica stilled and her jaw went slack.

“T-that was Lily’s father? As in biological father?” Lilith nodded.

“Oh my god. When…”

“August 17th.” She whispered. Jessica paled. She knew what had happened on that day. She cursed her supposedly sharp mind for not connecting that event with the birth of Lily nine months later. Lilith had never told her exactly what had happened. She only knew that she was raped.

“It was him? And you allowed him back into your life, not to mention into you? I agree that the man is gorgeous, but no one is that fine”

“I know. That is why I need you to listed. I never told anyone the details of what happened, and I really need you to know, so you can understand.” Lilith pleaded. Jessica was fuming. She’d land the bastard in Azkaban for hurting her sister.

“OK, I’ll listen, but don’t expect me to be happy about this thing you’ve got going with that bastard.” Lilith didn’t comment on the abusive name calling, but she felt an abnormal urge to speak to his defence. She shook her head to clear the fog of impulsive anger from her mind.

“I don’t really know where to start.” She sighed “He came from no-where and just pressed me against the wall and told me he would not hurt me if I didn’t fight. When he let me go I felt this weird compulsion to just do whatever he told me to. He put his cloak on the ground and told me to lie down. My mind was screaming at me but I did it anyway. ”

‘The Imperio. A dark wizard then. Good, then it’ll be easier to put him away for life.’ Jessica thought.

“Then he undressed me, but it wasn’t cold, even though it was a cold night. I wanted to run but I couldn’t move at all. Then, all of a sudden it was like my mind was clear again, but he was already lying between my thighs holding me down. The part that confuses me the most is that he was so gentle. The only pain was when he broke my maidenhead, but that didn’t even hurt too much because he prepared me. I can’t even begin to count all the times he made me come that night, and that’s not normal.” Jessica cocked a brow at this.

“No love, definitely not normal.”

“Rape s a bad thing. It’s supposed to hurt, but after the initial shock had passed and I realised that wasn’t in any pain, it’s like my body took complete control, and it…,” she waved her hand across her body, “... wanted him.” Lilith curled herself up onto the couch.

An image of Lilith sitting in her rapists lap, who was leaning against the couch just where Lilith’s feet were neatly placed, rocking back and forth, meeting him half way every time and glossing bodies sliding against one another shot through Jessica’s mind. It was shortly followed by another image of them; Lilith was still in his lap, lying against his chest with a tired and weak, but undoubtedly blissful smile on her rosy lips. Yesterday she would never have guessed that it was her rapist that made her smile like that. That it was he who could hold her like that.

“The next morning…” she continued, “I woke up warm, clean, dressed and not with nothing but a mild pulsing in my, um, nether regions.” She said blushing.

“He was gone, naturally. He wrapped me up in his cloak as well. I thought it was really strange that anyone would wear a cloak. It was so beautiful. I’ve still got it upstairs, I’ll go and get it later” Lilith said.

“You’ve probably noticed that Keith isn’t a nice man at all. Even on our wedding night he only thought of himself. He took his pleasure and left me lying there cold and in pain. He ha the same routine every time since then, plus minus a slap or ten. I got pregnant again just after Lily was born and I lost it because he could not keep his paws to himself. Had it not been for that my moth was here the last week of term he would have killed me along with the child. Dad has always said that Lily was an abomination, a child unworthy of God’s mercy. He does not seem to see that Lily is a blessing to me.” Lilith sniffed.

“I always considered your father to be a bit of a fool, but what about your mum?”

“She was there whenever she could, but dad keeps her on a tight leech if you know what I mean, but she’s a smart woman. She can curl him around her finger when she needs to.” Lilith chuckled

“So, back to the original topic. When did you meet Mr. Adonis again?” Jessica’s edge had dulled when Lilith told her how gentle the man had been, but now a new worry had entered her mind. He was likely to be an heir of Slytherin. As a Slytherin she would be awed to meet a descendant of such a man, but she also knew the stories that was told about Slytherin and not all were good.

“I met him yesterday. I saw him talking to a long haired blond guy in weird clothes, he even had a pimp cane!” Lilith giggled

‘That must be Cassander Malfoy’ Jessica thought

“Then I saw him again in the café, but I didn’t realise who it was until I met him the third time. Lily ran to play while I was inside and I spent the next hour looking for her. Finally I see her climbing one of the dinosaurs on the lake. She must have climbed up the tail and over the back. She was standing on its head and then she fell and landed directly onto his chest. He was sunbathing in one of the boats for rent. Anyway, the boat tipped over and they both fell into the water.”

“Oh my, how did that go?”

“I was so scared. By the time I got to the shore he was standing there with Lily cradled in his arms. We had the ‘thank you for saving my daughter’ talk when I realised who he was and vice versa. He asked me if Lily was his and I told him she was. He started stuttering and apologising until I told him to shut up and come along. He carried Lily all the way back. She was sleeping so peacefully it’s like she knew that she belonged to him as well. We showered, put her to bed and the rest you had the pleasure of witnessing”

“So you just picked him up and let him fuck you senseless?”

“Well, no. I asked him to.” Lilith said trying to avoid her friends pointing gaze. Jessica could not believer her own ears.

“You asked your rapist to sleep with you? What were you thinking?”

“I don’t know. I needed to feel him again. For the last three years I’ve been longing for him. The way he feels. The way he tastes, and his smell. Oh he smells so good.” She sighed and breathed in the air.

“I can still scent him in here, you know.” She rose from the couch and began pacing.

“I feel like I belong to him and him alone. Not like a prisoner.” She added when she saw Jessica’s expression. “He makes me shiver in lust just by looking at me. The way he held me, no one has ever held me like that. Keith could never produce as much as a tingle in my gut.”

“Wow” ‘Is it possible this guy is some sort of magical creature, and that she’s his mate? That would make sense since she lost the other baby. Submissive Mates are unable to carry others offspring once they are claimed by their Dominant. I hope he isn’t, then I can still lock him up in Azkaban’

“Do you want to see the cloak he gave me?” she asked suddenly. Jessica nodded and Lilith sprinted up the stairs with a new load of energy at the thought of the stunning cloak.

Jessica sunk back into the soft and inviting pillows decorating the sofa and let the new information process through her brain. She heard Lilith come rushing back down the stairs. She threw herself down in the sofa next to Jessica and held the beautiful garment forth. Jessica gasped at the powerful magic radiating from the cloak. She stroked the soft fabric with her hand. To Lilith it looked like she was admiring the softness of it, but she was actually analysing it.

‘Oh my god. This is loaded with ancient dark magic protection spells. It must be over a thousand years old. It’s purely made of threstal’s hair, and the gems seem to be cut dragon scales.’ She thought. Whoever the guy was he definitely wanted her to be safe, or he didn’t know what this cloak is worth.

“This belonged to him?” she asked in awe

“Yes. It belonged to his mother, he told me this morning. Apparently it had been passed down in his family for at least millennia. I wanted to give it back, but he said that as his firstborn’s mother it was mine by right.”

“Oh. So does this man have a name?” she asked as she turned the coat over to check the lining. Lilith never got to respond before Jessica drew a sharp breath.

“This cloak belonged to Salazar Slytherin! Oh my god, do you know how much this is worth? Just the name-tag is worth millions and that’s not even on the black market! That the fabric is threstal’s hair and the scales makes it almost impossible to place a price on this, and that’s just counting the materials. Including the historical significance of it, it’s completely priceless. On the black market it would probably go for something around 900 million galleons, that equals just about 7200 million pounds, 8100 million dollars. Girl, do you even know what you’ve got here?”

“I knew it was valuable, but I… I have to give it back!!!”

“Actually I don’t think you can. I’ll have to read up on it.”
What is his name anyway?”

“Tom Riddle.”

Jessica let her jaw drop to the floor for the second time that day. Thoughts like ‘Tom Marvolo Riddle’ ‘oh no’ ‘Dark Lord’ ‘muggle hater’ ‘murderer’ and ‘shit, I was tutored by the guy that raped my sister’


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A/N: now that im finished with my exams i'll update a bit more often, not that it should be too dificult. i cant remember when i updated last, was it in easter? anyway, please review, and i promise that there will be a chapter on saturday. that would be the 9th right

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