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The Dark Gryffindor

By: PensievePerson
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The Imperius Curse

Sheherazade: I am aiming at this story having more depth, but it certainly is not evident in the latest bit written here...Oh and what does a "superfreak" mean? I don't really know for sure.


Snape peered down at Valerie through long lashes, his eyes narrowing, on top of her over the bed. “Imperio!,” he shouted, whilst his wand was pointing at her. He felt his brain transfer the command through his veins and into his wand like there was a stem forging the connection.He saw a pronounced blankness overtake her.

“Put this inside your mouth and suck,” Snape said calmly.

Valerie opened her mouth wide to comply, looking stupid.

But suddenly she was hesitating. A voice inside said, “this makes you nervous, why should you listen then? You know you don’t want to!”

She felt the curse consume her though making her feel sicker and sicket, the longer she refused complying to it.

“NO! NO! NO! I Won’t! I Won’t,” she broke off, sounding like a child having a tantrum.

Snape in anger instantly waved his wand, smacking her face with a spell, a stinging hex. He turned her back over, and raised his hand to begin a spanking.

“No, sir, Valerie,” Snape sternly instructed.

About to land a first hard smack on her bottom, he stopped. The less rash part of him realized that clearly the girl might have the ability, the talent to resist the Imperius curse, which is a remarkably rare oddity.

He turned her back over, rapidly, and ripped the blindfold off her face.

He peered curiously doing Legilimency, her mind was empty like a blank slate from the Imperius. He gave the same command, “Suck it, now Valerie.”

He watched her start to, her lips brushing the wrinkly skin of his dick. Then she threw her head back, and began ranting again, “NO! NO, SIR! I WON’T DO IT!”

He saw in her mind her thoughts concerning the subject, the internal dialogue that goes on when one is talented at resisting the Imperius.

He would have to make the curse deeper than. “Imperio!…Imperio!…Imperio!”

It would now last longer and be more severe. Valerie felt a plunging cold sensation creeping through all her veins, and then she seemed to lose all awareness.

“Good…Now, suck this, Valerie.”

And she did so, with eagerness.

Once done, Snape pushed Valerie’s mouth off himself, and he knew just what he was going to do next. “Incarcerous…”

He waved his wand, several times nonverbally tieing her up at several strange angles, thin brown ropes visible. The ropes seemed to excite Snape. He had tied her ankles and arms to the bedposts, so that he was ready to get insider her through the diaper position.

Valerie was completely submerged, a look of a dazed trance on her blue eyes. As he thrust in and out of he heard her moaning, incoherent words. The truth was under this deep Imperius curse, it was so severe all she could think of was blissful thoughts, the most blissful being of Snape.

“Crucio!,” Snape said, and he felt an enormous sense of relief as she had orgasmed already, and now she would just be wobbling in the ropes she was bound in. The thin ropes stretched as she tried to writhe under them, but because the Imperius curse was so strong she could not scream, and her awareness of the pain was lessened.

This went on briefly, and then Snape unbound the ropes with a tiny flick of his wand. He pulled Valerie close to him, with himself under the sheets. Then he raised his wand again and started lifting the Imperius curse off her, which took a moment.

Valerie looked at him and whispered, “What did you do to me?”

“We just traveled through the darkest nether regions of magic….It was very dangerous for you, but I know how to go, without going too far…,” Snape said in a mysteriously soft voice.

“Sir? Remember when you spanked me before? I got kind of upset cause I was rude to you. But I'd like another spanking. Can I get another spanking, right now?”

Valerie meant she would actually enjoy it, now that she was happier and not upset about laughing during the oral sex like before.

“NO,” said Snape with firm finality. “Give me a genuine reason, and there will be another trip across my knee…Besides you need a salve, and I don’t have any right now. Next time your warranted a punishment, I promise it will be a hard ordeal whether or not it’s a spanking, Valerie.”

Valerie smiled a little and affectionately buried herself in Snape’s chest, he did not stop her. She could smell a mustiness, that was very soothing and masculine, kind of like cologne.

She could feel his hearting beating as she slept next to him that night. It was amazing how they were now a couple, or were they? Valerie wasn’t too sure.


Note: The next scene won’t have much smut, if any, which is good. I’m sorry that this story is not of the highest quality.
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