Under Moon and Sun
Not a chapter update! Review responces
Ok, I lied…
The next chapter isn’t ready yet, but I figured I’d post
review responses separately because of the length of the next chapter.
parts anyway. It will go up la
ton
tonight I hope. Thank you to everyone
who reviewed. It’s nice to know that
people are enjoying the story.
Xylodemon
up!
WhiteWitchDark:
I’m glad you think so.
the beginning so far – can’t wait to see were you go
with this!
Bet you thought the match was Gryffindor V Slytherin at first as well?
/p>
viewpoint on Gryffindor/Slytherin rivalry is very interesting, and one
automatically evil and every Gryffindor automatically a hero?
like your characterisation, Draco seems calmer and more likeable than usual
(although i am particular to bastard!Draco :P) and
Harry's feelings of being torn between who he is and who people feel he should
be. Keep up the good work, hope you update soon!
thing was a bit weird. And the eternal
question; what house was Wormtail in? I
remember reading a skit on Harry Potter
and the Sorcerer’s Stone called Torg
Potter and the Sorcerer’s Nuts. In
it, all the evil people were put into one house for easier book-keeping… If you
want a look at it, the address is
The sequel was called Torg Potter and the Chamber of Secretionsthe moment, yes but bastard! D wil will make an appearance.
become dark. Watch out for the consequences
of too much Dark Life…
friendship between Harry and Draco is interesting. Especially that now you have
revealed they are on the same side, but on neither of the ones that have drawn
the lines of battle. This is a surprising turn of events, but one that would
prove well-worth exploring. I look forward to more.
always seems to be watching and waiting rather then doing.
protect Harry (badly). Harry isn’t the
kind of person to sit around and do nothing.
Draco isn’t either. I’ve always
got the impression that he never really agreed isagisagreed with his father and
Voldemort. It was more of a case that he
was never asked. His attitude has also
changed since the first book. He appears
to be targeting people he doesn’t like now rather then anyone who doesn’t met
his fathers standards. I thought this
was a good way out for both of them…
fic and don't really have anything constructive to say. Just thought I'd let
you know that I'm reading. I'm now off to stalk you for an update list. Wish me
luck!
you’re enjoying it. As for an update
list… I don’t really have anything like
that. The only thing I could suggest is
joining the Yahoo! Group as I send out emails when I update a story.
if you want me to…
any of the developments with Neville, but it was interesting. I cannot wait to
find out what Hermione has decided and if Ron will be approached.
to see it coming, although I did mention Harry’s sexual position in the first
chapter. Harry can’t afford to care for
anyone, but he is a teenaged boy. They’re
not known for practising abstinence. Hermione
had decirealrealized (depending if you like the character or not) that she is missing
something in her life. As for whether she
joins the GF or not… Nope, not telling!
a few surprises first.
he's going to be too happy when he finds out about Harry's latest conquest.
This casual sex may hurt the team. I question his tactics. Of course we could
match him up with Blaise now eh? Thus leaving Harry &
Draco free to be together. Post soon!
point, Draco really couldn’t care to be honest.
The casual sex might be a problem in later chapters, you’re right, but
in Harry’s defence he wasn’t expecting Neville to go for it.
out. Who’s tactics?
someone else. That bit I have planned.
pairing in this fic, because there will be.
Neville and Harry aren’t the only surprise coming along.
and if I had of thought it out, I would have out this in the main folder to
keep the paring a surprise…