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Into the Shadows
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Harry Potter Crossovers › General - Misc
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
8
Views:
10,716
Reviews:
69
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
1
Disclaimer:
I don't own anything.
Chapter 3
On to the story!
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‘Find the boy! Protect the power! Claim your mate!’
The overbearing hybrid instincts had been yelling at him the last two days. Tonight Michael finally gave in to those calls. He desparately needed to find the young man that had effectively captured so much of his attention.
Grabbing his coat, Michael headed for the door, but he fell short when Selene’s inquiring voice echoed from the living room.
“Where are you going?” Her voice was soft, but a command still resided in its depths. Michael refused to meet her knowing gaze and instead finished pulling on his leather jacket.
“I have to find him. Something’s not right.” Because he refused to meet her electric gaze, Michael didn’t see her nod, but he heard to determination stemming from her next words.
“I know. The werewolf…” She started. “Last night was different, I want to know how.” Startled, Michael’s eyes snapped up to Selene’s face.
“You’ve noticed too?”
Selene smiled, a twisting sort of grin, that could have been considered a smirk if her eyes hadn’t held to amount of amusement they did.
“Michael,” the vampire said his name in the type of condensending tone that a mother would use on her children.
“Michael… I’ve been doing this a bit longer than you have. And if I didn’t, I probably would have been considered dust a long time ago. I’m trained to notice those things.”
The hybrid snorted at her rightfully cocky tone. Nothing could kill the vampire, especially now since sunlight was no longer a factor.
“Alright then, let’s go.” Michael said with a roll of his eyes and motioned toward the door. He shook his head when he saw the smirk slide across her face as she brushed past him. He silently closed the door behind him and followed Selene out into the street.
Tonight promised to be exciting, or at the very least… interesting.
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Sorry for the short length, but with this fic the chapters probably won't be too long until later on.
Thanks to Zuka, Lilith, Dragonsblood13, D-white bentley, Vampirezdarkgurl, ProfessorSibly, Rainbow, Angelkitty, Angelnomiko, and Speedie234 for all the awesome reviews!
SakuraMaxwellMinamino: If you're interested in HP/Pitchblack or Chronicles of Riddick crossover, I know of a few good ones. I think you'd really love Christine Pierson's WITHIN SHADOWS on fanfiction.net. It has just a hint of Underworld, enough to illude to a few plot points in her story, but is otherwise a HP fic.
Um, as for your rambling, I'd say the main thing would be separating separate ideas, points of view, and any change in the description. If you're talking about a purple, polka-dotted chair and then you're talking about a mirror hanging by the purple, polka- dotted chair, don't put the descriptions oft he two in the same paragraph. Know what I mean?
If it would help, you could send me a chapter of one of your fics, I could edit it, and then you can see what you think once I send it back.
Thanks again for all the encouragement and questions! I love questions... and reviews!
Review please.
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‘Find the boy! Protect the power! Claim your mate!’
The overbearing hybrid instincts had been yelling at him the last two days. Tonight Michael finally gave in to those calls. He desparately needed to find the young man that had effectively captured so much of his attention.
Grabbing his coat, Michael headed for the door, but he fell short when Selene’s inquiring voice echoed from the living room.
“Where are you going?” Her voice was soft, but a command still resided in its depths. Michael refused to meet her knowing gaze and instead finished pulling on his leather jacket.
“I have to find him. Something’s not right.” Because he refused to meet her electric gaze, Michael didn’t see her nod, but he heard to determination stemming from her next words.
“I know. The werewolf…” She started. “Last night was different, I want to know how.” Startled, Michael’s eyes snapped up to Selene’s face.
“You’ve noticed too?”
Selene smiled, a twisting sort of grin, that could have been considered a smirk if her eyes hadn’t held to amount of amusement they did.
“Michael,” the vampire said his name in the type of condensending tone that a mother would use on her children.
“Michael… I’ve been doing this a bit longer than you have. And if I didn’t, I probably would have been considered dust a long time ago. I’m trained to notice those things.”
The hybrid snorted at her rightfully cocky tone. Nothing could kill the vampire, especially now since sunlight was no longer a factor.
“Alright then, let’s go.” Michael said with a roll of his eyes and motioned toward the door. He shook his head when he saw the smirk slide across her face as she brushed past him. He silently closed the door behind him and followed Selene out into the street.
Tonight promised to be exciting, or at the very least… interesting.
________
Sorry for the short length, but with this fic the chapters probably won't be too long until later on.
Thanks to Zuka, Lilith, Dragonsblood13, D-white bentley, Vampirezdarkgurl, ProfessorSibly, Rainbow, Angelkitty, Angelnomiko, and Speedie234 for all the awesome reviews!
SakuraMaxwellMinamino: If you're interested in HP/Pitchblack or Chronicles of Riddick crossover, I know of a few good ones. I think you'd really love Christine Pierson's WITHIN SHADOWS on fanfiction.net. It has just a hint of Underworld, enough to illude to a few plot points in her story, but is otherwise a HP fic.
Um, as for your rambling, I'd say the main thing would be separating separate ideas, points of view, and any change in the description. If you're talking about a purple, polka-dotted chair and then you're talking about a mirror hanging by the purple, polka- dotted chair, don't put the descriptions oft he two in the same paragraph. Know what I mean?
If it would help, you could send me a chapter of one of your fics, I could edit it, and then you can see what you think once I send it back.
Thanks again for all the encouragement and questions! I love questions... and reviews!
Review please.