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The Children of Atum

By: ajgordon
folder Harry Potter › Threesomes/Moresomes
Rating: Adult ++
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Chapter 15: The Gift of Submission

Firstly sorry for the long A/N. Secondly I would like to thank yaoiObsessed for being my one hundredth reviewer between this and my one-shot remix for this story. You get two jars of Sev’s potion!!!

I have re-done the summary and warnings at the start of this fic, I thought I would post them here as well to make sure everyone sees them. Please read and if you are not comfortable with it then stop reading.


Title: The Children of Atum
Author: MeToo

Rating: NC-17 ++
Warnings: This story will contain mild violence and explicit chanslash sex, ie male/male sex with minors, sexual activities will start when Harry is 6 though penetration will not happen till he is 9 YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!!! This will not however be abusive, Harry is a creature(ish). The Abuse warning below is for the Dursleys).

This will also be Dom!Sev and Sub!Harry in a 24/7 relationship as Master/pet if you do not know what this is either do not read or keep an open mind.

The story will or may contain: Abuse (Dursleys), Anal, AU/AR, BDSM including a master/pet relationship, Bestiality (maybe), Body Modification, Bondage, CBT (Cock & Ball Torture), Chan/Shouta, Dub-Con, Exhibitionism, Fetching, Humiliation, Incest (Malfoycest), Language, M/M, Minor, Moresome, Oral, Paedophilia, Rimming, S&M (light), SoloM, Somnophilia (i.e. sex with a sleeping person), Spank, Toys, Violence (mild), Voyeurism, and anything else I or you can think of.

Summary: Harry is cursed before birth to be… licentious. He is rescued from the Dursleys by Sirius, Remus and Severus and is brought up by the two marauders who have been told the truth about Dumbledore’s manipulations by Severus. Harry will initiate sexual activities from a young age due to his curse. This story is about Harry’s sexual adventures both before and during Hogwarts. Slut!Harry Dark but not evil Harry. Manipulative Dumbledore. Dark but not evil Voldemort and Death Eaters.

This story is mostly about sex with a plot somewhere in the background, it is NOT about love and has little WAFF and is NOT Non Con!

Pairings: SB/RL SB/RL/HP LM/DM DM/HP SS/HP SS/LM/HP SS/LM/DM HP/OC LM/BZ SS/LM/HP/BZ TMR/HP TMR/SS/HP plus more.

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Dear GeminiCancer: I guess you probably aren’t reading this but I wanted to reply to your review just in case. I am saddened that you thought the last chapter felt like rape. At first I thought I had expressed myself poorly but then I received a bunch of other positive reviews and I re-read my chapter and don’t see where you are coming from. Both my original warning and my chapter warning said this was a BDSM fic, Harry wanted everything that Severus gave him. There is pleasure in pain. If you are reading this please read this chapter and think about Sev’s explanations then go back and read the last chapter again. I hope that you can see that this was very much consensual and not sick.

The following chapter is mostly a discussion about how Severus and Harry’s relationship as Master and pet will progress and about the Master/pet thing. Severus’ views on pet vs slave are my own opinions on the matter, it is an opinion and if you don’t agree that’s fine. I do not like the word slave, some do however and that’s fine but in this story Harry will not be a slave, he will be a treasured pet and I believe that there is a difference.

Last time
Severus slid his arm around the boy and once again snapped off the tight band, Harry convulsed coming immediately clamping down on Severus, drawing an orgasm from the man as well. Harry slackened, only being held up by Severus’ arm and cock. Severus smiled and laid the boy down, falling beside him, absently noting the boy was unconscious before allowing sleep to claim him.

Chapter 15: The Gift of Submission

Harry woke the next morning enjoying the feel of being wrapped in the strong arms of his new lover… master? The memories of the night before flooded through his mind, the things that Severus had said... “You are being punished because you are a dirty little slut… you will become mine. Mine alone… I am your Master, you are my pet…

The word ‘pet’ bounced around his head, what did that mean exactly? Did Severus want him to be his dog? It didn’t really make sense. He knew he wanted nothing more than to please Severus, and last night had been the most amazing experience, it was like he was floating above his body, he detached from the world and the only thing that mattered was that moment.

He decided to thank the man for the previous night and slipped from his arms, wincing slightly at the pain in his lower back, hole and his tender cheeks. The pain was not bad, more of a dull ache and it reminded him of the pleasure of the previous night. He was proud that he could take his Master’s treatment and the pain was a reminder of that.

He carefully rolled the man over onto his back and pulled down the sheet to reveal a half hard penis, it was so beautiful and he had to taste it again. Taking care not to wake the man he caressed the length using both hands, then slid one down to hold the heavy balls, rolling them in his hand before bringing it back up to the member. He decided that in this half hard state he might be able to swallow the whole thing so wrapping his lips around it he swallowed. It tasted so good, just as he remembered. He swirled his tongue around it and swallowed it as deeply as he could, he moaned around the flesh as he nuzzled the hair covered crotch however the member was hardening under his ministrations and he soon couldn’t hold it all. He began to suck and slurp eagerly though still carefully, using his hands lightly on the base, he wanted to prolong this, not wanting to wake the man quite yet. Lost in the moment he did not notice the man waking.

Severus woke to the wonderful feeling of his cock being engulfed in the wet heat of his new pet’s mouth. It was so wonderful and the boy had quite some skill, he was clearly a natural, and so eager. He thanked whatever deity that was watching that today was a Saturday and thus he wasn’t expected to be anywhere, he knew that no one would see him or the boy at all that day. He watched the boy working on his member and wondered how long it would take for the boy to notice he was awake, Severus used his occlumency to somewhat block out the pleasure, only allowing it to lightly wash over him instead of consuming him as it was attempting to, while he considered what to do next. He knew that while the boy had screamed that he belonged to Severus last night he wondered what the boy understood of what he was asking. He resolved to have a long discussion with Harry after he finished being pleasured. He had truly missed waking up with someone in his bed. The boy increased his movements, clearly trying to bring him to release and he sighed, dropping his occlumency to allow the pleasure to envelope him, he stiffened and came in the boy’s mouth with a moan.

Harry sat up looking at the man with a satisfied smirk on his face, literally the cat who got the cream. Severus leaned forward to kiss the boy, tasting himself on those pink petal lips.

“Good morning Harry, enjoyed yourself did you?” He chuckled at the boy’s enthusiastic nod, “That was an excellent way to wake up, if we are to continue this I shall have you do that every morning.”

Harry moaned at this, eyes dilating in lust for the dark man. Severus chuckled again, sat up cross legged on the bed and motioned for the boy to come closer. He pulled the boy onto his lap and curled his hand around the small erection, pumping it a few times before whispering to the boy, “Come pet”, it worked immediately and the boy came hard into the Potions Master’s hand. Severus brought that hand up to taste it for himself then offered it to the boy.

Harry eagerly licked his seed from the man, cleaning him with his mouth and tongue. It was erotic and he knew that it would please his Master. He then blushed as his stomach gave a loud grumble.

“Still hungry pet? We’d better get you some food”, he laid the boy back on the bed and covered them both with the sheet before calling for Tilly his personal elf for breakfast in bed for the two of them. A few moments later a large tray of small delicacies appeared on the bed along with tea, coffee, juice and milk.

Severus the manoeuvred the boy back into his lap settling the tray just out of reach of the boy, Harry gave him a strange look before Severus picked up a small pastry and held it to his lips.

“Let me feed you Harry, and we will talk about our relationship, this is part of what I want” Harry nodded before opening his mouth to accept the sweet pastry, catching the man’s fingers in his mouth to suck gently on them as he did so.

“What do you know about Master/pet relationships?” The dark man asked before popping a pastry in his own mouth.

“Umm… not much really… I guess it would be like a slave thing, I would do what you tell me to do…” Harry said nervously hoping to please the man.

Severus picked up a strawberry and fed it to the boy while thinking about his response, “That’s not quite right Harry but close. You see there is a difference between a pet and a slave, I don’t have slaves, slave implies that you have no free will, no choices , that, as you said, you would do what I say. When I hear the word slave I think of someone who is treated poorly and I want to worship you. I am going to lay out how I would like our relationship to work, what I want from you and what you could expect from me, then I want you to think about it carefully and tell me if you think it suits you. We can either makes changes to it that we agree on or we can forget about it completely, it’s up to you. It’s important that you are happy Harry so I want you to tell me if there is something you are uncomfortable with okay?”

Harry thought for a moment and nodded, Severus was so serious that it was making him nervous, he hadn’t realised that this was a big deal.

Severus continued to feed them both as he began to explain, “Let me explain everything then at the end you can ask me questions okay? I don’t have normal relationships Harry, I haven’t for a long while. I am a very dominant person and require lovers that are submissive, which you obviously are.” This struck a chord within Harry, he thought about his curse, he was a submissive from birth after all. “Have you ever heard of BDSM?” Harry shook his head. “It encompasses a range of different activities, mostly sexual and is a very clever acronym for three things: Bondage and Discipline, Dominance and Submission and Sadomasochism. Bondage is the art restraining the submissive, for example tying or cuffing you so you can’t move, blindfolding or gagging you so you can’t see or talk. It is about trust, that you trust me not to abuse you and can be quite enjoyable. Discipline as it sounds is about training and punishment, I will teach you, set rules for you and if you go against this you will be punished. Some punishments are very enjoyable for both parties, for example last night I spanked you, I also used a cock ring on you and I fucked you brutally, all were forms of discipline but we both enjoyed them.”

“Dominance and Submission is about one individual consciously giving power and control to the other, last night you submitted to me, gave me power by allowing me to control you. There are some very important things here, the first that it is consensual, you willingly give me the power, it also doesn’t make you weak as most assume. It takes a very strong person to give power like that, your submission to me is a gift, and though I am the one that is in control in reality you have the true power. You will have safety words one is a pause and one is a stop, these are for you to use if you are ever uncomfortable with a situation, these give you power because if you say them I will stop immediately. You choose to give me the power thus you are truly in control.”

“The last set is Sadism and Masochism this is the art of dealing and taking pain, it is something that covers everything from a light spanking like we did last night to extreme activities like whipping, cutting and branding. I am a slight sadist, I like giving a little pain, and clearly you liked the pain I gave you, it is not something however I wish to go into greatly, the extreme activities that I mentioned are above what I am comfortable with. However there is much pleasure that can be wrought with a little pain, and I did so enjoy turning your little bottom red last night.”

“Now there are many different ways people embrace BDSM, some just play with it occasionally, like handcuffing your lover or playing dominance and submission games. Others like myself live it 24-7 that means I want you as my pet and me your Master all the time, even out of the bedroom. As my pet I would expect you to follow my rules which will include things like a curfew, follow my directions, and have you care for me for example bathing me like you did last night or making tea the way I like it, and servicing me sexually. I as your Master would be a cross between a guardian and a lover for you. I would care for you and look after you, things like feeding you give me great pleasure. I will also teach you, guide you and help you to grow as a person, similarly to how you are my apprentice but it would be more intimate, more complete. You will defer to me on all decisions; however I will always take your opinions into consideration. I will love you, worship you show you pleasures you could never imagine and you will give yourself to me completely, surrender to my touch and my authority. Do you have any questions?”

Harry was slightly dazed and panting from the descriptions flowing from the man’s sensuous mouth, images moving through his head of him kneeling in front of the man, submitting to him, it took him a few moments to process that the man had asked him a question.

“Err… what… what would the rules be?” he stammered out.

“Well that depends, we would work on them together, we will write them out like a contract and sign it. This will give you power and rules so you know what is expected of you as well as what is expected of me. They will include things like that I will never abuse you and will always stop if you say so. That this relationship can end if either of us wants it to and the rules can change if we agree to it. I will require that while inside this room you will be naked at all times so I can see your pretty body, inside this room I am ‘Master’ you are ‘pet’. You will not engage in sexual acts with anyone without my consent, there will be times if you like that we invite another to join us in the bedroom to play or just watch but no one is to touch you without me approving first. Remember that if you agree your body, you pleasure and your release is mine. You will not be allowed to play with yourself without my consent, if you need release you will come to me and I will decide if you deserve it.”

“As I said before we will have two safe words of your choosing, one is a pause, this is for use when you need a break or you want me to slow down or need to change positions. I will stop what is happening, listen to your request and comply. The second is a complete stop, if you say this word whatever is happening stops immediately, if you are tied up I will release you, we can then discuss what went wrong and either continue if you agree or stop for the night. This is only to be used if you really mean it, if the pain is too great, if you are scared or if you don’t want to do something I am trying. For these they must be something you are unlikely to say normally, for example using ‘stop’ is a bad idea as you may say that and not really mean it, it also must be something simple, so that you remember it. I usually like to use ‘red’ as the stop and ‘yellow’ or ‘orange’ as the pause but it’s up to you. What do you think of that?”

“Wow… I really never thought it would be this… big. Umm I guess those rules would be okay, I’ve never liked clothes anyway,” he said the last part cheekily.

“Brat”, the man responded, “So what do you think about this?”

“Well… it… it sounds good, I really like that you would care for me and teach me and I want to make you happy. I like making you feel good and you made me feel amazing last night, no one has ever made me feel like that. But… I…”

“It’s okay Harry,” the man sighed, assuming the boy was rejecting him, “I understand that you don’t want it, I-I’m sorry, it was stupid…”

“No!” Harry interrupted, “It’s not that I don’t, it’s that I need to think about it still, and I would like some more information.”

“Of course”, the man said warmly, “I was going to give you a few books about it and would like you to read them today and think about it. Write out a list of questions, things you would like, things you wouldn’t like, then show them to me, we will discuss it further and you can give me your answer whenever you’re ready. I will continue to be your friend and mentor no matter what you decide.”

Harry smiled, it sounded overwhelming and he was glad that Severus had books for him, Harry loved books, loved discovering new knowledge they had been his friends growing up with minimal human contact. The two finished their breakfast and dressed for the day, Severus produced three books, two muggle ones; ‘The Loving Dominant’ and ‘Screw the Roses Send me the Thorns’ and a wizards one: ‘The Magic of Dominance and Submission’.

“The world of BDSM is relatively the same in both worlds”, he explained, “the difference is that in our world we have spells to add to the experience, the emotions and feelings are the same. I unlike many wizards do not scorn the muggles, however I still believe that they should not know of our world, their technology and weapons are too formidable not to respect them but I also fear them, they would wipe us out if they knew we were here.”

Harry nodded, he agreed with the sentiment, he had studied muggle technology as well as wizarding history, he could just imagine a 21st century witch hunt with missiles instead of pitch forks… anyway he was getting distracted, he was supposed to be considering becoming a man’s pet… pet? Did he really want this? Part of him screamed ‘NO!’, it insisted he was an independent, powerful wizard, though another part, a much larger part craved it, he wanted to be used, to be owned and cared for, he wanted to cater to every whim of the dark man, he wanted to lose himself to ecstasy and know that his Master would catch him when he fell, he wanted to pleasure his Master, make the man moan and call out his name.

Harry took the books and retreated to his room to read the tomes, he had some serious thinking to do. As he read he started the lists that Severus had requested the more he read the more he wanted this, he was looking at an image of two wizards, one on his knees, naked except the leather straps that fastened his forearms together behind his back and leather collar around his throat, the other wizard was fully dressed his purpling cock was jutting from his robes, he was gripping the hair of the kneeling wizard and thrusting violently into it. Harry was mesmerised, he wanted to be that guy kneeling, he wanted Snape to use him like that, he wanted to be his pet.

He was so hard he opened his pants to take up his cock and remembered that he wasn’t supposed to touch himself, he knew then that he would give himself to Snape. Harry quickly stood up and ripped his clothes off as fast as he could.

Severus was pacing, what would the boy decide? Could he have the boy without him being his pet? He didn’t think so, it had been so long since he had had a vanilla relationship, the boy was so submissive, he had to have him. Merlin he hoped the boy would say yes.

Severus stopped as he heard the door to Harry’s room open, he turned and his mouth dropped open, Harry stood there, naked as the day he was born, red stain on his cheeks, head bowed demurely, small cock protruding from his groin. The boy walked towards him and sank to his knees, turning his head and bearing his neck submissively.

“Your pet is ready for you… Master”, he whispered.

Severus gulped, “Does that mean you agree?”

“Yes Master, I… can we… um… I mean do we have to go through the contract now… I hoped we could… um…”

“Celebrate?” Severus smirked, “Did you like reading those books pet? Did you find the pictures? Did you think about all the wonderful things I could do to you? That we could do together?”

Harry whimpered and nodded, flushing brightly, he was so turned on.

Severus chuckled, “Well pet shall we then?”

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Bwahahaha my first cliffy, sorry *evil grins*. I had to do it… my muse made me!

As always let me know what you think, especially for those in the scene let me know what you think of my explanations and if there is anything I should add/change.

Also I would love to find a beta to go over my previous chapters to help me especially with my punctuation and gramma. If anyone can help please review with your email it would be very much appreciated. I am an Engineering student and am writing this to work on my creative side, I write so many boring scientific reports that I can’t remember how to write like this anymore. I haven’t written fiction since high school and my analytical engineering mind hates the imperfection because I know I got it wrong and I should do better :) Anyway that’s enough from me see you all next time,

Love always, MeToo
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