Pretty Prey
Chapter 12
Hello once again to all my readers, I'm glad you all enjoyed the last chapter, but I'm sure you'll all enjoy this one more.
I really want to thank all my reviewers... there were about 30 of them.
so that 162 (You may notice I put the number I'm up to on most chapters... that's so i dont lose count)
Okay first my thanks to
Moyima, snapeisthebest, Hitori-Hoshi, GreenEyedRaven, GrimWriter, vibora , zoe , demon 0, Elric Maxwell, Yana, christina, missanthrope, SugoiNoVenom, momoko , maria joao, Ray Coon, Sorceress, Kermit,wizli, Lu, Slashy Snitch, Lissa
thuyhy ( Love the author *raises eyebrow* :) )
thrnbrooke ( I dont think they're going to be soul mates... Sorry, but I think that plot has been rather over-used)
MMB ( All with good time, I like it when things build. The telephathy between them I think I'm going to turn into more of an emotion thing. But it's not only that, that's going to build up in this story I've decided that all the women in the story seem kinda flimsy so I'm changing some stuff around...)
Zuka (*smirks*)
Demerious (I'm glad you had fun in China. I'm also glad alot of people like the story with the 'bonds/dominating dracos/flimsy harrys talking to snakes for social comfort etc', I really just thought of what would make me happy when I read a story)
Kireania ( Don't worry I actually like Ginny and you'll see what's happening soon enough.)
Rabidsqurl (Wow I don’t think I’ve ever managed to be complemented and insulted at the same time so skillfully I must applaud you. But yes this is my own writing, in fact my friend Kaze whose writing “Light and Dark” read through my first 9 chapters before I even posted them, so I guaranty this is of my own production. I just don’t get a lot of time to work out my author’s comments before hand, I tend to write each chapter and copy and paste onto the net and after all that I put in an author’s note. So my author’s notes are never really anything big or very skillfully done, because I normally leave it to the last minute and don’t have time because I spend all my time working on the horrible grammar and spelling on each chapter. I hope that sorts out any issues you have with my writing, and I’m glad you like the story. Though if you’d like I will spend more time on my Authors notes and such... but that also means it will take longer for me to post each chapter.)
Note: I dont really take flames well *sob*
Okay this chapter contains alot of Slash (I mean alot, the whole chapter is basically slash...mmm yummy)
Chapter 12
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Harry could barely make out anything except the feeling of bliss and liquid silk wrapping itself around his naked body.
After so much pain this just felt like touching heaven, he belonged here and he knew it.
“Mmm Draco” he whispered as he felt another naked, larger body slide along his own. He knew it was Draco his mind felt so relaxed for once, he wasn’t on fire and everything felt right with the world.
Soft kisses were planted up his neck and large soft hands slid down his body, curving to every arch and crevice along Harry’s body. Everything was warm and soft, like silk and cottons.
He was in a bed, he knew that and it was a large bed surrounded in greens, god he loved that colour.
The fuzz that seemed to reside in his brain disappeared and he could see the concern and worry etched into Draco’s face.
'Draco mmm this is right, this is nice, Draco will take care of me, make love to me.’
Harry was glad he had, had his eyesight corrected at the end of last year so that he could make out the deep emotions sprawled across Draco’s face.
Madam Pomphrey and Hermione had ganged up on him and corrected his eyesight with an eye healing potion.
Merlin he wished Hermione hadn’t changed, she was his best friend, more so then Ron. Hermione had a wit that was unexpected from someone as bookish as her. Harry and Hermione had become close friends in the forth year when Ron was ignoring him.
Hermione and Harry had discovered things in each other that they didn’t see before. Once Harry had managed to get Hermione to relax on the books they had been able to confide in each other and delve deeper into each others personalities.
But without reason or even warning Hermione had turned up one day and announced she was dating Ron, Harry had been shattered he was so sure that they had confided with each other in everything.
Harry had even told her that he thought that he might be gay or at least bi.
And when Harry had told her that he had found a great spell in the restricted section over one of their ‘conversations’ where Harry and Hermione would share private secrets. Hermione had gone to Dumbledore and told him everything, it was like she changed so quickly and Ron had been so happy. Harry had just started ignoring them both.
But Harry didn’t want to think of all that unpleasantness now; he was happily being devoured by his lover. His beautiful lover was now doing sinful things with his tongue.
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Draco had grabbed Harry’s smaller frame and clutched him to his chest and ran down all the halls, ignoring the stares he was getting.
Draco had ran to his private rooms and locked the door with more then one powerful spell.
He knew what Harry needed now, he needed to know that he was forgiven for letting that weasel bitch touch him and to know that Draco still cared for him.
Draco laid Harry out on his bed, and placed a light enervate spell onto his body and started to divest him of clothes.
Draco unclasped Harry’s and his own cloak of and threw them to the end of the bed.
Undoing the buttons of his own shirt he then moved on to undo he ones on Harry’s.
By now beautiful green eyes were peering at him from thick black eyelashes. Draco kissed up Harry’s chest.
“Mmm Draco” Harry whispered and Draco was in heaven.
This was what they needed right at this very moment both bodies were demanding attention.
Draco threw his pants across the room and gently undid Harry’s own and slid both his pants and underwear from his body.
Spending his time; he kissed, licked and stroked Harry’s body and enjoyed every whimper the body beneath him produced.
Draco spent a lot of time slowly stroking and teasing Harry’s cock to fullness, so that he was as hard as Draco already was. Draco kissed Harry’s dopey eyes and pressed a kiss to those chapped lips.
Draco reached across to the bedside table and got a jar of lube that he kept there.
Slowly undoing the jar and dipping his fingers into the cold liquid and pressed a single digit into Harry’s winking hole. Harry gasped underneath him and wiggled a bit to accommodate the sensation.
Draco then placed a second digit into him and started scissoring the hole, adding a third finger Draco enjoyed the little gasping sounds Harry made as he brushed his fingers against his prostate.
Draco slid his fingers out and Harry made a small whining sound in protest, he smiled at this as he slicked his own cock with lube.
Pushing at the entrance of Harry’s body he paused slightly as the head slid in. Waiting for Harry to adjust, he then pressed further into the body. ‘So tight, so perfect. Mine all mine always mine, he belongs to me.’
“My god you’re tight and so right” Draco whispered into Harry’s ear. Draco started moving gently with small thrusts and tender ministrations.
“Harder please harder, stop torturing me,” Harry whispered into his ear, the hot breath on the curve of his ear sending his wild in lust.
Rearing back he pounded into the small body beneath him in different angles trying to hit that sweet spot inside Harry.
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“Unh!” Harry yelled incoherently as Draco hit a spot in him that made his body become alight in pleasure beyond his senses.
Push, thrust, pull, and gasp.
Harry breathed in the musky smell of sex and passion. The air was fuming; earth was stopping all for them, only for them.
Push, thrust, pull, and gasp.
The air was thick with zeal and intense concentration, heat waves flushed from them. Harry moved to throw his muscular legs over Dracos shoulders and pull him further in.
More, more, more, push, thrust, pull, and gasp.
“Please more, please more.” Harry begged the rhythmic pattern caressing his nerves, teasing him over and over again.
Harry arched up, tears of pleasure caressing his face; he was so hard now, so close, so close. Draco ran ghost tips along his erection, pulling him to a point beyond lust.
Harry attempted to touch himself but Draco grabbed his hands and pinned them above his head with one hand.
“No not yet” His breath came out in small pants that licked Harry’s face.
Push, thrust, pull and gasp.
He could feel his ball sacks tighten under the pressure of Draco constantly pushing against a spot that made him see stars.
“My Harry, you’re not allowed to touch anyone but me, you’re mine, always mine,” Harry shivered at the possessiveness in his voice.
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Draco teased Harry to the point of completion, reducing him to soft moans and harsh whimpers. Sweat slicked both their bodies in their passion.
‘Gods he’s so beautiful’
Draco watched Harry as he slowed right down and slowly thrust into his tight channel.
He looked so debauched like a sinful angel fallen from the heavens.
He felt Harry quiver with pleasure, he knew that neither of them could last much longer, so he reached down and slowly slid a single finger up Harry’s shaft, which was all it took for the body beneath him to convulse and come in pearly white strings.
Draco couldn’t hold on much longer and let his passion and sex overcome his body with orgasm. White hot pain mixed with pleasure flushed through his body as he came in Harry.
Draco was exhausted, so tired, he could literally feel the bond pulsing between them now and so he pulled Harry’s body to him, in his arms and let sleep over come him.
At last everything was perfect.
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I loved that chapter, it was so cool to make
O.K before I beg people to review I just want to say that I dont want flames... at all.
I almost gave up on writing this story, I will stand constructive critism but not someone telling me outrightly that i suck.
Also any flames I get I will delete (As I just did)
But I beg my lovely reviewers to REVIEW
I really need to know what you like, or i can't fix it. ( also that there are lots of warnings at the beginnings *sigh*)
So please REVIEW
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