The broken, The unwanted, and The Inhuman.

Groundwork:

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This is a response to Gillyweeds' Harry/Draco Creature fic challenge.

If you wish to join, please do! I'm up for competition.

Hogwarts was closed for a year, but now that Voldemort has been killed by Harry, It has been re-opened... Sadly, Ginny died as well, Leaving Harry to return crushed and alone. But Draco, being tormented by his Veela instincts, has returned as well with all his inherited Veela powers and in good graces of the light side... with only one goal in mind: Force Harry submit to him, seduce him into becoming his Mate, and seal the end of the war with the remaining pure blood families with their bonding...

The Fellow Slytherins and Gryffindors 7th years are forced to get involved, But can this group of broken and unwanted teenagers manage to save there best mates and the world while still bleeding from there own wounds?

(HBP happened, Dumbledore is dead, Snape and Draco turned out to be good guys..)

(DH happen, but with Luna, Ginny and Neville joining the trio on the search, and Snape switching side earlier; So because of this Remus, Tonks and Fred didn't die. Nether did Bella. Ginny, though, did die.)

Ok; I've been reading DH over and over and over, SO!!.. Sorry for not updating.. Also my Muse was gone, so i was without advice... But I've found a way to make this story D.H compatible, so i hope that makes up for it.

DH happen, but with Luna, Ginny and Neville joining the trio on the search for the Horcruzes. and with Snape switching sides earlier. So because of this Remus, Tonks and Fred didn't die. Nether did Bella. Ginny, though, did die.

You win some, you lose some...

~The Professor

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Pairings:

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Harry/Draco

Gry:
Ron Weasley/Hermione Granger
Luna Lovegood/Neville Longbottom
Dean Thomas /Seamus Finnigan

Sly:
Pansy Parkinson./Blaise Zabani.
Millicent Bulstrode/Theodore Nott
D. Greengrass/S. Bones

Other pairs:
Remus/Tonks

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Select Character Backgrounds:

Harry Potter
7th year Gryffindor, Sickly thin.
Half blood english boy
Boy-who-lived; Boy-who-Won.
Broken and Bleeding.


Ron Weasley
7th year Gryffindor, Tall and Stocky.
Fullblooded English Wizard.
Hot head, future Auror.
Stoned and strong.


Hermione Granger
7th year Gryffindor, bushy brown hair.
Muggle-born Witch.
Book worm, Ron's love.
Working yet worrying.

Draco Malfoy
7th year Slytherin, Athletic build.
Pureblood W/ Veela.
Former Death eater, War Hero.
Obsessed and Searching.

Pansy Parkinson
7th year Slytherin; Tiny stature
Pureblood, Black-haired, English.
Zabani's girl, Millicent's mate.
Gossip girl, Drama Queen.

Blaise Zabani
7th year Slytherin; Tall and Buff.
Pureblood. Big bald Black boy.
Rich Pretty boy, Draco's mate.
Plan maker, Sarcasm King.

Theodore Nott
7th year Slytherin, unhealthily thin.
Pureblood, White Emo kid
Death eater's son, Millicent's love.
Abused and withdrawn.

Millicent Bulstrode
7th year Slytherin, big-boned.
Half-blood Bulldog.
Pansy's cohort, and Theo's "Angel"
Kind but cruel.

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Beta:
Stargatebabe, AKA; Shanna is my beloved Beta.
She is the Writer of the Harry/Neville "Confessions of a Gryffindor" and
"Truths and Lies."

Respect her,
Love her,
Read her fics,
And thank her for ridding this Fic of my horrid Typos Demons.

Much love, Shanna!

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Review responses:

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Greeneyedraven:

I'm glad that you're happy I've joined the challenge, It was too good to ignore.

Little did you know, as you where reviewing my ground work, i was typing up the first part..
and i ALWAYS, ALWAYS Deliver on my challenge fics.

WUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

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ACR1228:

The reason i Don't have more cross-house is because i wanted to keep this in the Sly and Gry inner circles of both Harry and Draco. While a few other will be showing up and popping in and out, and reacting, I would like to keep it clean as possible..

But you have a point..

You've convinced me to turn one of my Sly's to a Huffie.
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Greeneyedraven:

I've been spell checking as much as possible, but yes, i do need a Beta.

Sadly, all my other betas have back-fired or plain quit on me, so I'm shy. Very shy.
I will write regularly, and update pretty much everyday until it's done.
Yes, Luna and Neville will be in the next chapter, as they will be with Harry, Ron, and Hermione on the train, i just wanted to get the lesser used chars out and about first, but i might edit and add them in the first chapter later on.

Right now I'm writing the second chapter, though, so editing can wait.

And, Yes, Dumdbledore is dead. Everything that happened in HBP is real and true in this story.

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myniephoenex:
thrnbrooke:
celestialuna:
mnfm:
Kurai:

Thank you, you four, and i love Possessive Draco as well.
I plan to have much fun with him..

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Night the storyteller:

I will reveal more in the story, and nowhere else....
decides the fact that one of these Chars is going to die...
WUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

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thrnbrooke::
LMAO! Holy have mercy indeed. You'll have it soon, I promise.

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Night the storyteller:

Thank you very much.
Yes, I know the other four will find out soon.. As will the rest of the school, actually.
They are supposed to.

Snape is helping, and soon enough all 6 couples will be taking sides, one way or the other. You'll see alot more interaction very soon with the couples, as well as on their own: and I hope you enjoy it.

and yes, Headmistress McGonagall dose know of the plan, She was told by Snape, and is none to happy.

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HPDMkawaii:
*Sigh* Yes, I know.. Evil part-cliffie... Don't ya just hate that?..

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Snarry_lover:
Yes, yes, yes, i know a need a beta; but for now, i just re-spell checked chapter 1..
Again.

I'm glad you liked my story, and i hope you keep reading. ^.6

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Night The Storyteller:
LOL! Well, after having a mind-link with Voldemort for 7 years, he kinda knew..

He don't know isn't the first connection, though, but Hermione will help him figure it out...

Harry will try to fight it, tooth and nail.. And, Of course, the school will be torn in three...
People that want them to get together, People that want them apart, and people that want them for themselves. ^.~

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thrnbrooke:

LOL! I hope you got as much of a kick reading it as i did writing it!

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yesIam:
My Writing style is call Omni-present 3rd-person real-time.

You see just about everyone, but only one at a time. Events do not overlap, interaction is time-lined accordingly...

Oh, Yes; Draco just Tell him he will be his was great.. but Just wait until they have to see one another everyday. LOL!

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Shado:

THANK you, TY, and YES!!! I need a Beta, Bad, and if you are willing and won't quit on me, I'll gladly give you a shot at being my Beta.

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Kasey:
LMAFO!! *Falls off her desk.*
Wow.. That has to be one of the most interesting reviews I've ever gotten.
TY, and Thank you, and I hope you like what I'm planning next.


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Night the storyteller:
Draco?... compassion?... Care?... BAAAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAAA!!

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Anon:
Oh, they will kiss, but i dough they will make up anytime soon.

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DsrkMiko6:
Yes, this is a fairly knew fic that is updated often.

I love the Hard-to-get Harry as well, and it will get even more complicated as it goes on...

And.. I Never said Draco will get harry in the end, now did I?....

WUAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAAAA!!!

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Binnicle:
LMAO!!! Yes, Harry will kick Draco's Arse. Correct, Draco doesn't understand that Harry really wants to be left alone by everyone, ESPECIALLY him, and that his is TRULY overstepping is bonds and interfering. He will get him come-upence I assure you. Thanks for the review and the kind words!

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Night The Storyteller:
Harry does need to know more about Veelas, and being a mate, but he seriously doesn't want to. If it was up to him, he's ignore him completely, but your right he does have to act, and soon.

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Never_tempt:
TY, and thank you. Right after reading your review, I tore my story to pieces, and started putting things right. I have forgotten for a moment or two that i needed to double-check things, but now I'm pretty sure i've got most of it fixed.

I have a website, Harry potter Lexicon, that I use, so i used that to cross-reference my writing, and even patched up a few plot holes.

I'm glad you like my writing style, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, and THANK YOU for your review.

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Darkless:
Yes, my Minon.. REVIEW!! REVIEW!! REVIEWW....!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you, and I'm glad you like my Selfish, Uncaring, Spoiled and overly-animalistic Draco and Emo Cold-cold time-bomb Harry... And yes, all hell will break lose once harry wakes up WITH Veela powers effecting him.

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Kurai:
Yes, I know, it was for creative purposes, and I've had alot of bad reviews, so I might re-write it.

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snarrylover:
Yes, i know, and thank goodness, I've got a Beta now! Don't worry, it will be fixed.

And i mean to switch the POV.. But i might be fixing that as well.

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thrnbrooke:
Well, you wont' have to wait for long! It will be up in a day or two, I promise.


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phoenix 5:
DONE and DONE and Shanna thanks you as well!


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Soria:
It's fixed! It's fixed! and thank you.


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Gilly Weed:
Don't worry! I think the quote you'll looking for is "Fuck Draco, I feel sorry for Harry."

Nott is cool like that..

As far as the Ginny mourning, that will come into plan very soon. VERY, VERY soon...

But Draco will have to wait for information on the Durselys; He hasn't earned it... yet.

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Night The Storyteller:
Sadly; Yes and No.. It DOES mean war, but it does NOT mean they are now bonded.

Sorry! Draco will still have to work for that to happen. The next chapter should clear things up a bit for you, I promise..


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Kuria:
TY, and I shall!! Hope you like, and i like Impotence curses as well.


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thrn brooke:
No, they are not past that stage. They might have to start over.. they might not have to.. You'll just have to read.


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kittycat30:
WOOT for TEAM HARRY!! Yes, i know, but Draco will be getting away with far less as the time goes on, and Harry will be showing another side very soon.


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Soria:
*Bows*


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Stasha:
*Bows again* Thank you, love!!


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Night the storyteller:
I Agree... Draco needs to start shipping in or start shipping out.. You'll see why Draco is go hesatent to give Harry any leeway later on...

He will start being gentlemanly and be nice, but he needs to Get kicked in the arse first.


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Yana:
LMAO!!


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Stasha:
More H/D Goodness, Coming up!! Hope you like, love..


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Anon 1:
NOPE, Not in this fanfic..


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Anon 2:
*GASP!!* NO!!! I love Ginny! I just needed her out of the way for this..


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night the storyteller:
BINGO!!


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Soria:
After reading your reply, i realize that that was a fairly big problem, Wasn't it?..

So, i went ahead and fixed it.. Chap 11 is now up.. Hope you like!


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Thrnbrooke:
^.^ Here is it; Hope you like!


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Thrnbrooke:
Calm down, it's coming!


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Night the Storyteller
Rigth along th elines of what i had planned... Only withou the outburst. You'll see what i mean.


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Stasha
Yes, Yes, i'm evil, i know..


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Becky;
Well, Love, if you where paying attention, I was leaving clues..

Theo's was bare and nearly empty.. Harry's is full of Dudley's old things.
Theo's run has a flue in it, that is how Millicent got it.. Harry's does not..

Plus, i had already stated that Ginny was dead in the Summary, and Stated that Voldermort was dead in the writing.. Why would Harry be at the Dursleys if he was over 17, and Voldemort was gone?...

Ron and Hermione are during the second chapter; they are not talking telepathically, or reading there expressions, they are reading through the lines of what the other is say. They have none one another long enough for that. Though, you are right, i should have clarified that.

The second chapter was a bit more confusing, and more typos then anything else.

The Second compartment of the second train compartment sounded.. Cheesy. Stupid, So i put "Train" Down in hopes people would understand i meant the 2nd section of the train..

And it was "Defending" It was "Defeated".. Once again, a Typo that most spell checkers overlook..

And everyone but you seemed to get it, and be fine with letting it go... But, now that you pointed it out, Sure.. I've fixed it.

Unlike more authors, i don't mind be corrected with my spelling at my plots.. But love, it's the way you go about it that's getting to me... Me and My Beta (Yes, i do have you) Work hard on this story, but still even the best miss things.

I've fixed the Errors because you are right, and i won't delete your review because that would be cruel.. But the next time you send a review this rude; i will Delete it..


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rAiNwAtEr:
Thanks, Love!


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Soria:
AWW! Sorry to keep you hanging.. i think you'll like my latest update best, thou.


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yesiam:
I'm glad you liked it!! *Bows in return.* I'm ALWAYS happy to get a new reader.


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Night the story teller:
Once again, So close, but yet so far...

As always, in my web yet woven, it is intricate and unseeing in it's future twists.. You and good on pickign on on hints and foreshadowing, but i am just as good and cloaking my storylines..


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thrnbrooke:
and here it is...


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Soria:
*LE GASP!* Such a Dirty mouth!! LMAO!!


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Paigeey:
Harry? Pregnant?.. Hey now, I'm not THAT Cruel!!


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dagget:
My Beloved Beta fixed it for me.. YAY! Make sure to give her props.


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Stasha:
*Sings* I'll never let you down; even if i could.. I'd give up everything, if only for your good..

OH! omg, Thank you!! No one else noticed it was my B-day.. O.O Thanks!


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Lupinslady:
Aww! And just for that review, I'll write in Lupin and Tonks, Just for you!!


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Lee, Jo, Luie:
AWW!!! *Hugs* TY, you Three!


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Night the storyteller:
Yes, He does.. But also, Draco is Draco; and he thinks he can have his cake and eat it, to..

Said, with the cake being harry, that's just not how it's going to be.


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Celestialuna:
*Bows* Thank you and for all your wonderful reviews!!!


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thrnbrooke:
Yes, they are!! EEKK!!!! chap 14 is up, and 15 is coming soon! is if you want to find yu, you have to keep on reading!


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Ellie:
Harry's KINDA being a Drama queen... SO??!!


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stasha:
I might wait on the "New World Order" But i hope it turns out as good as i want it to.. An yes, i will made harry and Draco happy again; but of course, they had to work though things first.


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Night the storyteller:
Thank you, master... *load gong, then bows* I belive that this story, like life, will lead to mclear waters.. and many, many rocks...


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Rachel:
Draco never gives in! LOL!


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thrnbrooke:
It's Coming, It's coming!! and yes, something is brewing.. WUAHAHAHA!!


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Stasha:
He will try.


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hilfreak:
I'm glad you like then, and I'm glad you find time to read them! Thank you.


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Cindy:
^.^ I love conflict in general! But I'm glad you like it.


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harryxXxdracoxXx:
Thank you!! *Bows*


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thrnbrooke:
WUAHAHHAHAHAA!!!!


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Kittycat:
Hum... That gives me a Idea.. Thanks!!


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Night the storyteller:
Yes, it does.. Crazy, hum?


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adriannamalfoy:
Yes, he does; But Draco DOES deserve it.


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Ero:
Yes, Ero, I will be explaining things very soon. ^.^ Until then i hope to like the lead ins.

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Lunatic with a hero complex:
Ok, Ok!! I'll make a mailign list, if you REALLY, REALLY want one..


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Rachael:
^.^ I shall.

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night the storyteller:
^.^ Ok, but only for you.


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night the storyteller:



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Soria:
Continued!! Love me?


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Celesialuna:
^.6 Glad you think so!!


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shygirl:
^.6 Glad you like it.


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Night the storyteller:
They talked it over, but i didn't write it out.


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Solomon:
i got your e-mail, and added yout ot eh list. No kids this story, but if things work out, there might be a sequel in order.


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harrydraco4life:
Thing always get worse before they get better.


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Seraphine:
I have a hard time dragging things out, but it will get better with the courting starts.


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thrnbrooke:
How'd you guess? ^.~


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snapdragon:
Some storied aren't for everyone. I'm glad that you are exersizing your right to stop reading stories that upset you, but i hope you continue reading.


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fragonknight01:
Sadly, no... Me and my beta have a Tag-your-it kinda thing going on. i post the un-betaed chapter after i write it, Shanna copies it or gets it mailed from at the same time, and I normally add the betaed chapter to the same time i add the un-betaed new chapter.


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lilith:
*Bows* Thanks.


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Night The Storyteller:
Yes.. and he will.


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thrnbrooke:
^.^ Close to what will happen. Nice!!


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celestialuna:
Your added, and thanks!!