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What an unbelievably entertaining beginning! This is just bloody great fun and I applaud your superb handling of dialogue and character! You\'ve got a great twist here and a vivid imagination - keep at it! I will look forward to your updates!

Be well.

This is great! :) Justin\'s a scumbag, Charlotte\'s adorable, Snape\'s a morose old softie and his mum\'s a sweetheart. Brilliant m\'dear, simply brilliant :) Can\'t wait to see how it all develops.

Love it! Especially loved his reluctant reaction to Hone one whispering in his ear.

Chapter 4 was interesting. Now Sev\'s gonna scream now or be in a extremely bad mood, cuz now he knows that Mione suggested that Ursula set Sevvy up with Sybil. *shudders* That was cruel! Brr... Mione got an evil sense of humor! *whistles* I like her! *fingers wand* Can I please borrow Justin for a moment? I got some lessons I need to teach him!

Yay i love it well done i cant wait until they get together. And for Severus to kick Justins ASS!!!

*smiles* Just loving the story. Like how diffdifferent from other stories. I like that Severus lets Charlotte call him Severus... *chuckles* well i cant wait for the rest of the story.

I really, really like this! It is so sweet how Snape is kind to Charlotte. My favorite line has to be:

OMG!! That was great!! Can we have Severus levitate Justin over the lake now?? Then the squid can eat him!!!!!!!!! Update soon!1 I love this story!!

So, reviews make the author happy... Do happy authors update sooner? I\'m going to hope so.

Interesting story -- I like it. However, although I can understand about not wanting to argue in front of the kid, I\'m a little surprised Hermione lets Justin get away with all that. She\'s clearly changed since we\'ve last seen her. Are we going to find out why? Interesting, too, that the only times she shows some of her old spirit are when Snape\'s around. Hmmm....

Hooray, you\'ve got a new story started and I love it. You\'ve picked a really unusual husband for Hermione in Justin (who incidently you are portraying wonderfully as a complete git!!) I would never have thought of him as Hermione\'s type, but as we can see, he\'s not really is he? Poor Hermione.
Snape on the other hand is brilliant, dark, brooding, sarcastic, snarky, and yet he softened beautifully to entertain a little girl. Oh, I can\'t wait to see how you get these two together and for Justin to get his comeuppance...oh please, please tell me that he does?!?! (Igestgest making the Giant Squid eat him!)