rate_review Reviews

Ohhh that is mad! Soo good. Severus is just so funny. Fuck you - well that was intellegent! Haha...very good...keep going

AHAHA!! hehe, that was funny, man! Yeah! Omg..I\'ve never read a fic where Trelawny comes on to Severus!! <3!! that was so great!..I love how he panicked(sp?)!!! hehe. Yes, yes, at least your writing quickly. =P

Gin

holy crap! wow! he kissed her!!..i love unexpected things like that. *gasp* that was so great...LOL@the whole friggin bar scene. he was so childish with his little newspaper, aww. =P ahem. i saw that you said you\'d update tomorrow(sunday). don\'t make me upset when i check tomorrow. =/ *frolics!*

~Gin

How terribly funny! Its an very interesting and different response to the challenge. I\'ll be waiting for more!

As the song says...Don\'t leave me this way!... How could you produce such an evil cliffhanger, things were really starting to heat up and now I\'m on the edge of my seat to find out what happens next between our beloved duo. Oh, and of course to see Justin suffer a slow, painful, humiliating fate.(Hopefully at the hands of Super Sev, Potions Master Extraordinnaire!!) When Justin was trying it on with Hermione I kept hoping that Hermione would just hex it off!!!
Just incase you haven\'t guessed I\'m really looking forward to the next update, and hoping that it\'s soon...Pretty, pretty please:c)

Am anxiously awaiting the next chapters!

Poor Poor Hermione! She\'s married to a jerk and practiclly has to raise that little angel herself! I hope that JustJustin gets a good swift kick in the arse!!! How dare he expect her to have sex w/ him when he treats her and that baby that way! I can\'t wait to read what happens next now that Sev and Mione have given into temptation a bit! Excellent writing by the way!

Oooh, this is sooooo good! Hope Justin gets whats coming to him soon! I am a complete convert to HG/SS! Love it! Update this soon!

Oh! So well done. It seems to be so perfectly in canon to picture their first kiss coming after a huge fight.

I just LOVE your fic. keep up the exccellent job and update sooner :)