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for Time Changes Everything

by Fervesco

person Alana
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for Princess Severus, Destroyer of the trouser furniture of evil husbands - all hail the tiara wearing, tea drinking Potions Master!! cha chapter was priceless. The tea party was soo sweet and cute and I cackled with glee when Snape caught Justin in a clinch and made him pay...oh joy, oh rapture. I hope it\'s just the beginning of the pain to be inflicted on the spineless little squirt.
Poor Severus though, he can\'t do right for doing wrong. I can\'t wait to see if Hermione hexes the truth out of Justin and then kisses and makes up with Snape and his amazing magic wand!!!!
person blueribbon
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really like this story...

-Blue Ribbon
person Kiristeen
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOLOLOL Just finished chapter two. :snickers:: LOVE that Snape said charlotte could use his first name!!!!!!! That was just too rich!!

And no, (G) I\'m from the US; though, I\'ve been asked that before. ::gets a puzzled expression::

Kiri -- off to read more
person nesscafe
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo, wonderful new chapter! That little punk weasle! He\'s cheating on her too! GRRRR!!!! Boy when you write a guy worth hating you do a good job! I\'m sitting here thinking he\'s so lucky that\'s all Sev did! I hope Severus really lets him have it because he told him to confess and that worm didn\'t and now Mione thinks he\'s lying! Hermione is so very screwed up in the head! In a way, I can\'t blame her. No matter how rotten that swine is he did father Charolet and I\'m sure that she just wants her baby to have a mummy and daddy, but is she so blinded by ideals that she can\'t see that w/ a man like that they would be better off w/out him!? Doesn\'t she see that staying w/ that pig is teaching her baby girl that it\'s okay for men to treat their wives that way? UGH! Wake up Hermione! God I love your story you\'ve got me wanting to throttle all the characters like they were real people! LOL! Okay, going back to the luny bin now!
person Kiristeen
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaacccckkK! What a tangled web! Delightfully twisted story. : )~ I eagerly await more.


Kiri
person Lizzie
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Snape is good at being nice if he trys isn\'t he? or i thought so! Actually...i like nice Snape! Oh No, they fell out! Please make them all heppy- i feel sorry for Snape! Never thought id say that...! Anyway..reviews, better than sex??? Are you serious? okay, well i\'ve left a review, so now ure happy right? Good. Update soon, i apologise for my mad mood- i get them occasionally! Like twice a day...never mind! For any1 reading this who thinks i need a padded cell, don\'t worry. I dont!
person Lizzie
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY...not HEPPY! Sorry! I am not mad anymore, just extremely embarrassed- i h8 typos!
person Sadie
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay let hermione kick his ass now. I loved Snape with the Crown and pink tea cup very cute. Now lets get them together.
person Rilla
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O.M.G. I LOVED the tea party. Hehe. This was a fabulous chapter. Poor Snape, trying to do the right thing and getting screamed at anyway.
person coriander
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this - I personally like sensitive Sev. Keep it going, can\'t wait for more.