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by Fervesco

person Gin
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh crap! i almost forgot to mention. most of the ladies who are reviewing you now, (such as myself and BeautifullyMalicious) are members of THE BEST LITTLE SS/HG YAHOO GROUP called WIKTT or, When I Kissed The Teacher. its fab. you should definately subscribe. ;)
person Alana
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh Happy Day...you updated and Justin\'s going to get his from Hermione, make him suffer Hermione...vengeful?...moi?! Sweet and tender Severus*SIGH*, he was soo kind to little Charlotte, don\'t you just love him? I\'m enjoying this story soo much and I\'m glad to hear that Snape will soon be having his wand buffed by Hermione!! Is it too much to hope that since Justin is a poor excuse as a husband and father, and let\'s face it, as a man, that he is also completely pants in bed? Perhaps Severus can show Hermione what she\'s been missing all these years;C)) Can\'t wait for the next installment.
person Potions Mistress
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo!!!!!! Justin got his butt kicked!! Justin got his butt kicked!!!! OOOH Hermione still owes Severus a huge apology!! UPdate soon@!!!
person Lizzie
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
And??? Honestly, first you leave the story hanging when Hermione is about to get revenge, then you don\'t finish your reply to my review. Now, i could sulk...but that would be boring and a waste of time. However, i shall make a deal. U update real soon and i\'ll forgive you okay? Btw, if i sound like a raving lunatic again, its cos a certain husband of mine woke me up at 6am to go to work and i hadn\'t gone to bed til 2.30am. consequently i feel like i\'m about to fall over with tiredness. Plus, i\'m looking afty siy sister\'s kid this afty so by about dinner time i will be like..asleep or completely oblivious to everything. I am, however, moaning ond ynd you dont wanna hear this. But on the other hand, if i dont talk to someone adult b4 the lil\' six-year-old comes round, i may go insane, and actually enjoy playing with Barbies, which would be scary.....
ANYWAYS, great chapter, and please update soon (btw, i\'ve forgiven you already!) as i need something to keep me awake!!!
person Helena
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yhis is getting better and better!!!!
Please tell me that Hermione is going to kick Justin ass,wasn\'t about time!!!
Please update soon!!
Oh by the way i almost had a heart attack about the scene when Severus was playing with Charlot,that was brilliant!!!!!!!
person nesscafe
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe! I am so glad that I am going to have company in the luny bin!

Wonderful wonderful, chapter! I loved it! For a while there I was really worried about that poor baby! Severus to the rescue! *grins* I am so glad that Hermione is finally letting Justin have it! No good, dirty, rotten, cheatin\', lecherous, sleaze ball! He deserves whatever hex she shoots at and and then some! :cP It would be funny if she gives him the same punishment as Snape and finds out there\'s still nothing there! LOL! You can use that idea if you haven\'t got ideas already! Can\'t wait for the next update!
person ElvenCatling
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! *blinks rapidly then cheers* Wooo hooo!!!! Go Hermione! Hex the bugger! YES!
person Jessica
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I loved it! Keep writing more!
person Catherine
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...wonderful chapter...Poor Charlotte...:P Im so glad Hermione Sev Severus are back on talking ground.
Hehe...keep going hon...cant wait for more.
person Laerai
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the twists... How everything is not so cut and dry andple.ple. There is depth. Ohhhh and I want to see what Hermione does to his nose! (Oh, and Princess Severus was Hilarious! One of the funniest mental imagies. You had me rolling! Kudos!)
rai rai