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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is an intriguing way to get the pair of them together and I must admit I LIKE the fact that it isn\'t too fluffy.
The sense of mystery with the letters and the medling, conniving of Severus\' mother are all done rather well. I do get the sense that it\'s becoming a bit drawn out though - the action, intrigue and shock of discovery need their chance to provide some of the humour.
If you want it to be more angsty and mystery orientated, it is your story and you can write it anyway you want. Never give into the power of the review - you\'ll kick yourself for it afterwards.
The sense of mystery with the letters and the medling, conniving of Severus\' mother are all done rather well. I do get the sense that it\'s becoming a bit drawn out though - the action, intrigue and shock of discovery need their chance to provide some of the humour.
If you want it to be more angsty and mystery orientated, it is your story and you can write it anyway you want. Never give into the power of the review - you\'ll kick yourself for it afterwards.
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! What a tease! I love the way you ended the last chapter! Please keep the story coming I am enjoying it very much!
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Welcome to the club dearie! That was a plain out and out EVIL cliffy! LOLOL
Loved the woman\'s response. ::giggles:: Can\'t wait to find out who she is.
Kiri
Loved the woman\'s response. ::giggles:: Can\'t wait to find out who she is.
Kiri
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I started reading this a while ago, but I hadn\'t read the newest chapters. Please continue with this. I can\'t stand the suspense! I just hope that it ends up being my favorite paring!
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NNNOOOOO!!! Bad author! evil evil cliffie!!!! Need to know now!!!!! Please!!!!
Loved Snape\'s morning musings, and response to the last letter, like he expected it to bite him or something...priceless!
Can I have more now please???
Shem xxx
Loved Snape\'s morning musings, and response to the last letter, like he expected it to bite him or something...priceless!
Can I have more now please???
Shem xxx
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are so very cruel! I thought surely by now you would spill the beans! Ugh! You have to update again! Like now! I have to know who she is!!!!
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay - so I\'m hooked. Terrific story. You\'re right, though, the chapters are too short for those of us who have been pulled into your web. Update soon!
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::snerks:: Cute interaction with Peeves. : )~
Kiri
Kiri
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October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
This is a greedy request for an update. The story is awsome. Do they now have some sort of psychic bond now that Severus knows he\'s met his soul mate? I can\'t wait to find out how he discovers who the author of the letters is. (That last sentence sounded wierd) It\'s a really fun story to read. Keep up the good work
This is a greedy request for an update. The story is awsome. Do they now have some sort of psychic bond now that Severus knows he\'s met his soul mate? I can\'t wait to find out how he discovers who the author of the letters is. (That last sentence sounded wierd) It\'s a really fun story to read. Keep up the good work
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I love this story. It\'s very funny and it is keeping me interested. It has a very good plot and I busted up laughing over his thoughts about waking up in Trelawney\'s bed. LOL, I would have been just as mad and startled! Anyway, I hope that you update and soon! ^_^