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for Mothers, Witches, and Bargains Made

by Kiristeen

person nesscafe
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better and better! I can\'t wait till Sev and Mione realise they aren\'t going to be able to get out of this marriage! *evil laugh* I hope you have anothhapthapter in the works! I can\'t get enough!
person GeekGoddess
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon....this story is so good....I can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person farfie
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH!!! i KNEW Severus\' mum would find a way to control this herself. she\'s oh so very crafty. i think i\'ve just found my new heroine! MUWAHAH! i love her. she\'s so snape-like in a feminine way. kudos to you and your creation of her. kudos!
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter!!!!! =oD I\'ve been following this story since like Chapter 5.... and I\'m hooked!!!! I love the devious way you portray Snape\'s mother... it\'s simply amazing... and of course you\'ve got to love the fact that they\'re being out-witted! Ohhh... and what\'s going to happen to Trelawny??!? And what about Snape\'s mother... did she trick them into being married permanently? Grandchildren perhaps? *sly grin* I can\'t wait to find out!!!!! Thanks for keeping up with the story!!! ~Leigh~
person shemhamforash
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhh...this is getting positively delicious...tormenting BOTH t Het Hermione and dangerous *drooling copiusly onto keyboard at thought* Sevviekins...soooo want more of this....100 degree heat is bad yes, but I will not sympathise until you have to suffer through 110 degree heat whilst 8 months pregnant having to live for weeks on end in bathtub full of water, pruning like Voldie\'s face in attempt to not go into early labor from said level heat...It was exrcuciating...now back to the story...

Waiting...

still waiting...

Anytime your ready...

Now???

Damn!!!!

*snarls*

Shem xxx
person Paprika
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"That\'s positively medieval!\" he exclaimed in horror.
is this quote from the movie \'the trouble with angels\'?
I love your story and i hope youate ate soon, that quote just made me start thinking that i\' heard it somewhere before. If you haven\'t seen that movie, go and rent it. It\'s a great movie.
person Rilla
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is great. I just love Snape\'s mother in this one. So conniving. I love it that Ron is given license to behave like a jerk instead of actually being one.
person Michelline
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Giggle! I was figuring something like this would happen. His mother is way to wily for them to outsmart her. I\'m sure she completely anticipated this. She has out-Slytherined the Head of Slytherin... Go MUM!
person farfie
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Severus Severus! you lie to your self, that you do. you know you want some sentimental crap in your life! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!

As usual, wonderful chapter! can\'t wait for more! ^.^
person shemhamforash
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, do you know that for the first time I can remember, I am completely out of things to say??hmmmm....probably because naturally Im not a chatty person and have used up current reservour of babble....So how does is this review going to help you??? Probably isn\'t apart from that I can tell you that it is good...very very good...yummy mmmmm *crunch crunch*

Had to stop by and at least say \"Shem woz \'ere...\'03\"...Currently chanelling bad old days of baggy pants and nikko graffiti

More soon please *precious...my precious* -:fuck of gollum:-

Shem