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for Mothers, Witches, and Bargains Made

by Kiristeen

person Rilla
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Just brilliant! 3:15 am, wow! I am impressed all around.
person shemhamforash
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
After reading this chapter must say I am giving serious consideration to your attempt to bribe me....So loved to see Hermione finally break loose and give ol\' Sybill some much needed \'understanding\'...Don\'t blame her really...I mean if I was the one with a marriage contract to Sev, I would be chaining him to the bed *smirk* if it were necessary to keep him from other females * and considering this group and YOU especially, it is I am afraid very very necessay, not to mention enjoyable*

Currently basking in mental imagery of Sev tied to my bed, waiting for more of your attempt to convince me that he is in Hermione\'s life and not mine *Liar...evil...lying...horrid woman*...

Shem xxx
person Helena
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is absolutely hilarious!!
Keep up the good work,can\'t wait to read more!!!
person nesscafe
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN!!! What a chapter! Hermione sure did let Sybil have it! I can\'t say I blame her! I\'d rip her arms off for touching my man too! I\'m starting to feel less and less sorry for her! The fact that she went to Malfoy and made Voldemort order him to marry her was just wrong!!! At the same time it would serve her right if she lived and just ended up married to someone horrible like Gilderoy Lockhart or something! I don\'t know I\'m torn. Oh well, I hope they can\'t find a way out of this marriage! Hehehe!
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story makes me mad with delight when I read it.

I love the predicameney\'ey\'ve been put in and I love how they\'re dealing with it.
person Michelline
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
EVIL EVIL EVIL!!! Laugh!! C is the kicker, indeed. Can\'t wait to see what Hermione and Severus are going to talk about...
person shemhamforash
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh..That marriage contract was worse than mine....well, just as bad anyway....Your right, wouldn\'t swap labors for all the Sev\'sin the world...ok, maybe for Sev but...2 hours with the first...7 hours second (only bad during last 2 of transition though)...Your starting to become very...malicious..no...wrong word...down and out real dirty and evil with these two...I am so making you High Priestess of torment....

Craving more...

Shemxxx
person Jade
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait until Trewnley*sp finds out! Oh what fun writting that...hehe. I hope Harry and Ron have some extra fun in her class.
person Rilla
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fantastical! I love Serapha. She had great observations about Albus\'s mind at work. Looking forward to seeing Severus and Hermione discuss things.
person farfie
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MUWAHAHAH!! I LOVE SEV\'s MOTHER!!! she\'s brilli I K I KNEW she was pannign something!! hahaha. this is great. utterly fantastic!