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for Mothers, Witches, and Bargains Made

by Kiristeen

person farfie
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmm, i wonder what snape is thinking of doing? hmmmmm... again, terrific chapter. ^.^
person nesscafe
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dang it\'s about time!!!! I love this story! I\'ve been itching to see what happens next! Now I\'m really excited! You have to update more! PLEASE!!!!!
person M
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this fic. Please update soon!
person farfie
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol, that was great! i loved Hermione telling Trelawney off about Sev beign HERS. MUwhahha!
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*claps* Bravo! I was quite scared when you started off with Trelawney being a main character but you\'ve done great things hun. Sorry it\'s taken me so long to review again, I\'m waaaay behind with both my updates and my reading. But anyway, awesome story hun, can\'t wait for more more more! Onward and upward

~Faerie
person Cassandra
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story. I love it. Hermione
person Cassandra
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story. I love it. Hermione
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I has a good plot and all my questions are being answered. The setup of the larger plot, Trelawney\'s worry over her death, is also being setup nicely and it coordinates well with Hermoine and Severus\'s storyline. I love how you have all the details and character development because it is written very smoothly, leaving no gaps or holes for the reader to wonder about. finifinitely like your writing style and I didn\'t see any grammar or spelling errors to comment on. Please keep writing this story because's g's good! ^_^

Ciao!
person Michelline
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I\'m glad to see Hermione has begun her role with a vengeance. Amazing... Can\'t wait to see the reactions!!
person Veronica
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More please ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!