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for Mothers, Witches, and Bargains Made

by Kiristeen

person Estrilda
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing update to an amazing story. The build-up has been wonderful. \"Are we almost there yet?\" she cries with child-like anticipation.
person buttercup
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really getting good! I love Snape\'s mom. I\'m home with the flu. An update on this story would make me feel soooo much better.
person becca
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
excellent story!! well-written and highly entertaining!
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am throughly enjoying this little story. Great job and I look forward to updates =-)

Karena Elizabeth
person Lizski
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I really look forward to seeing what you do with this - especially seeing how Severus manages to not get himself killed! I really like the tht tht that you\'ve put in to this - I am vemprempressed!
person Estrilda
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow - S is so wonderfully in character. I can\'t wait until the confrontation with his mother. Tstorstory needs you - we need your updates here, please. Thanks.
person farfie
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE! MORE! i demand more. right now... i\'m waiting... impatiently waiting. come along now. *checks watch* your taking too long with this.

hehe, but seriously. this story is amazing! i can\'t wait for more.
person nesscafe
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I sure wish you could update this more! It\'s taking forever and it\'s such a good story! Ugh! MORE! MORE! MORE!!! Sorry, now that I\'ve got that out! I loved tast ast chapter. Now if only we knew what Hermione really thought of marrying Snape, since she\'s really gonna have to now! *evil laugh*
person shiv5468
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
re counselling - we\'re English. we do stiff upper lips and cups of tea, we do pulling your socks up and getting on with things, we DONT do counselling.

person Lynn
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I figured I\'d speak out about the psychologist comment made in your corrections note. As someone who is studying to become a psychologist, I completely agree with you that a lot of the students shobe sbe seeing someone about what they\'ve experienced. However, in the realm of the story, psychology would be a Muggle science, and beyond that a lot of the things in the stories about bloodlines and the like are taken from a time when beatings and other acts like that were more okay, or at best not discussed with the outside world. That\'s my two cents on that!

As for the rest of the story, it\'s coming along wonderfully! I love stories like this, you\'re developing the plotline amazingly. A lot of authors are afraid to have their stories reach this length so they rush into the action, making the story much less believable, you don\'t do that, and I LOVE it. :)
can\'t wait for more!
Lynn