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I\'m intrigued! She\'s not really going to die though is she? Oh come on! Have a heart! Let the poor thing live! Something minor could happen to save her from meeting her end! Anyway, I like what you\'ve started keep going! The more you update the more I review! ;cD

ooooh! I ly lly love the premise for this story. I can\'t wait for you to continue. I thought the prologue was really well written and I love the fact that you\'ve written trelawny as a slighly paranoid but true seer. I\'m looking forward to seeing how you decide to play out the cause and effect in the story line. I can see how sybil\'s paranoia might in the end be her demise. how that happens, I\'ll be looking forward to finding out. I like the fact that you also allude to the fact that trelawny may try to murder one of them. great start and I\'ll be looking forward to reading the next installment.