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for Mothers, Witches, and Bargains Made

by Kiristeen

person Laerai
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful start! And I am soo glad that you aren\'t rushing into things. It takes time to develop a plot and make it plausable! I\'ll be reading to see how it turns out!

Keep writing,

Laerai
person nesscafe
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is turning into such a good story! Come on have a heart let the crazy broad live! Maybe she mierprerprits her own vision! What?! It could happen! Can\'t wait fot the next update!
person MoD
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! this is so intriguing. Can\'t wait for an update.
person Niceven
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Somehow you managed to bring back to life a mundane theme. Please do continue.
person J
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I want more. Did they outsmaer? er? Or is she playing them? LOL what fun
person fervesco
schedule September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great start! It\'s nice to see Sybil on another level here and an explanation as to why on earth Dumbledore hired her! Poor old Sevvy is having a bit of a rough time - hope he gets a nice reward for his troubles soon! Once again, this is a wonderful fic and I anxiously await the next chapter (soon, right?!)
person nesscafe
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH! You are so cruel! I still can\'t help hoping poor Sybil will live! That poor woman has had a rough go. Everyone thinks she\'s a nutter and she isn\'t! It\'s just not fair! I can\'t wait for the next update! This story is getting good!
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great idea darl! It\'s not fair though, you\'ve made Sybil an important and rather decent character and it\'s starting to make me feel that my unreasoning hatred of her was.. well, alittle unreasonable *L* Can you pretty pretty please kill her soon? Then maybe I\'ll feel better.... All the best, hope to read more soon :)
person Rilla
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 was fantastic! I loved Sybil holding it over Severus\'s head like that. His reaction was perfect.
person Rilla
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this. I have never read *anything* from Trelawney\'s point of view before and I\'m really looking forward to more of it. (And I\'m sure you know how much I adore Severus and Hermione as well!)