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for Mothers, Witches, and Bargains Made

by Kiristeen

person Red Writing Hood
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...I hope Severus explains his conduct or at least falls gratefully at her feet. My...some men have a MAJOR problem with women...GRRR...Get with it Snape...Marry the chit and be happy damn it!

LOL

Red
person Rilla
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the twist of Hermione feeling rejected by his reaction.
person GeekGoddess
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL....that was a fabulous chapter...I bet Snapes\' naughty mother put that dream in Hermiones head...please please update soon.
person nesscafe
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aw!!! That insensitive jerk!!! He hurt her feelings! PIG!!! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter! This is coming along wonderfully! Update really so PLE PLEASE!!!
person Len
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I remember when I turned 15(also in sepember). I shooed my parents away and had a party, in the morning I was furious about having to clean all the cherries from the walls, no memory of how they got there. Needless to say I\'ve never consumed more alcohol then a couple of glasses of wine or champagne since.

The chapter was extrodanary. And the frequent updates are very good. One or two days of absence are nothing, just don\'t dissapear for a month...

It\'s horrible what you make Severus go through. I feel sorry for the fanon one, but then I bring Mr. Canon to my mind and lose all symphaty. You are a mistress of torturing Snape...
person Veronica
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More please ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person farfie
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. fascinating. this story is so cool. ^.^ and i have to congratulate you on thct tct that you keep Severus very well in character. not many people can actually do that. (i know i can\'t)
person Rilla
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just loved it when Snape asked Hermione if she thought he hatched!
person shemhamforash
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"Poorr poor Sevvie\" *strokes is hair while his head rests in my lap... dream on Shem!!* \"Its ok, even though mean old evil Voldie is in on it too now, I promise I will make everything all right.\" *evil glare at Kiri, raises silver ceremonial daggar to her throat* Make it all right, Kiri, Or I swear I will not be responsible for my actions.... You\'ve got Sev crying you know that?...He thinks everyone is ganging up on him.... I don\'t like seeing him so distraught.... *smirk* Who the fuck am I kidding?... I love it!!!.. *Sev runs screaming from the room, tears streaming down his face*... Opps may have gone too far there!

Well, you know what I am going to say now don\'t you,,,, So I will spare my poor aching fingers and finish with \"Be Obscene!\"
I don\'t know why... it just felt goood at the time...

Shemxxx
person shemhamforash
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, its not my birthday, I don\'t celebrate Christmas, and I hate the Easter bunny...
woohoo!!! 2 chapters in one day! WOW what a gift.

You really had me going there for a while thinking that Sev was skillfully manage to aviod little Miss Grangers unknowing (to even her at this point) affections. Nasty, evil woman ::grins cheekily:: Wouldn\'t it be the best to be able to manipulate real life people like that, instructing them on their actions and how to live theri lives like your own personal Barbie (Gah!) and Ken (double Gah!) dolls! *sighs* NO? Its just me then? Damn wierdo (me not you)

Excuse me while I go and crawl into a very dark hole to hide. I\'m not comming out either until the next chapter is up either *pokes tongue out childishly* Not that I expect that to motivate you or anything*sighs*

Sitting in darkness waiting for more

Shemxx