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for Mothers, Witches, and Bargains Made

by Kiristeen

person nesscafe
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why that sneaky little devil! But I hope he has to marry here anyway!!! *evil laugh* The big question being will Sybil live if oes?oes??? Dum Dum Dum!!!!
person Jade
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm Poor Sybil! NOT! I want more, i can\'t wait to see the school\'s reaction!
person shemhamforash
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mwahahaha> The voices the voices! *hello is there anybody in there?* Always did love a really good Snape battle of the psychotic consciences, and poor poor Hermione, always the self sacrificial lamb....Just once I would like to take her plac sha share some of the burden that is thrust upon her over and over again by callous authors always forcing her hand to be put in compromising situations with Snape *evil evil smirk*

Want. more.now...\'nough said... you are always the Queen of written word (at least when I read your work before I go on to the next one)...ahh that was meant uncharacteristically in the non-bitchy way...

Shemhamforash
person farfie
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol. this chapter was great as usual. and that is hilarious what you did with your daughter. my uncle did that to me a few years ago (when i was about 16). it had the same effect. i\'m never touching that stuff! hehe.
person Miss Night
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Eh, it is a rather slow begining but hey you\'ve basically gotten to the point that he can\'t get her out of his head now. Can\'t wait to see the next update.
person GeekGoddess
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God...Did Trelawney write Voldermort? I hope Snapes\' mom invokes her right and does a marriage contract with Hermione to prevent the demented Seer...I feel like I am reading a soap opera....its so much fun....great chapter.
person shemhamforash
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOOHHHHHHOOOO!!!!!
Score 1 for Hermione--Now where did that come from young lady?? I suppose we will find out soon enough though. :sniff sniff:

\"Poor Poor \'Mione...Kiri make it better like she make Sevvie better---\"...Evil author, another bloody cliffy *snarls* I am going to start biting soon if it gets too much more painful *smirk*WantWant. More. Now.

Shemxxx
person Jade
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Love, want more. I think Severus and Hermione have a problem with their looks!
person speakerforthedead
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!
person Night
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ouch thats a little extreme....but other wise the chapter was really funny!