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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED HERE?
First, I was all about the smut. Nice surprise, by the way. Wasn\'t quite expecting that.
Then, I was completely worried about Hermione. But I knew she had to be alive at least, because there hasn\'t been a happy ending yet AND THERE MUST BE A HAPPY ENDING!!!
Next, I was really pissed off at Hermione for not telling Severus after SHE PROMISED she would! What a bitch!
Then, I was happy that they finally told each other how they felt. Even if it was in their own emotionally-retarded way.
Then, I was super-happy that they were going to be dirrty again.
And then, what the hell? Is that Minerva? What\'s she doing spying?
Very interesting, you super-bitch. And I mean that in a good way. Really, it\'s my highest compliment. I place only myself and Stephanie McMahon of WWE fame above you. And maybe Donatella Versace from what I hear, but I may be wrong.
God knows I\'ve been wrong about celebrities and their private lives before....*blushes profusely, grins, and imagines all the things Alan Rickman could do with her*
And no matter what, I will ALWAYS share Severus with you. He is, after all, a major dude, and I would not feel justified in keeping him all to myself. He is a beautiful butterfly who must be free to fly from girl to girl giving them bestbest sex of their lives.
Oh, dear. I\'ve gone off on a tangent again, haven\'t I? Okay. If I feel the need to ramble pointlessly anymore, I\'ll just e-mail you.
But I bet you\'re not the queen of incoherent, long-winded reviews anymore...
First, I was all about the smut. Nice surprise, by the way. Wasn\'t quite expecting that.
Then, I was completely worried about Hermione. But I knew she had to be alive at least, because there hasn\'t been a happy ending yet AND THERE MUST BE A HAPPY ENDING!!!
Next, I was really pissed off at Hermione for not telling Severus after SHE PROMISED she would! What a bitch!
Then, I was happy that they finally told each other how they felt. Even if it was in their own emotionally-retarded way.
Then, I was super-happy that they were going to be dirrty again.
And then, what the hell? Is that Minerva? What\'s she doing spying?
Very interesting, you super-bitch. And I mean that in a good way. Really, it\'s my highest compliment. I place only myself and Stephanie McMahon of WWE fame above you. And maybe Donatella Versace from what I hear, but I may be wrong.
God knows I\'ve been wrong about celebrities and their private lives before....*blushes profusely, grins, and imagines all the things Alan Rickman could do with her*
And no matter what, I will ALWAYS share Severus with you. He is, after all, a major dude, and I would not feel justified in keeping him all to myself. He is a beautiful butterfly who must be free to fly from girl to girl giving them bestbest sex of their lives.
Oh, dear. I\'ve gone off on a tangent again, haven\'t I? Okay. If I feel the need to ramble pointlessly anymore, I\'ll just e-mail you.
But I bet you\'re not the queen of incoherent, long-winded reviews anymore...
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that first part was kinky. A new year present really..oooohhhhh!! i have to give it to you. you really know how to make people burn with curiousity. Lucius really makes the story hot.. So they\'re in love huh? that was a nice declaration of undying love. i just hate it when authors make it too mushy!!
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Delicuous Smut, delightful chapter. GrrArg, how DO you do it??? :-) Blessings, Kait x
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yet another too good for words chapter! You are so good at this! How do you write something so romantic and yet so heated!? It\'s really amazing! I wish I could go there! Don\'t worry, it will be at least till Monday before I can start working on Confessio Hub Hubby commandeers the PC when he\'s home and I have all my ideas on the PC not this slow peice of crap laptop. Oh well, he\'ll be back to work Monday and I\'ll be missing him all day. Bitch bitch bitch no matter what he does! Hehe!
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! They finally admitted their love for one another. Yippee!! I loved how you had them fighting when they admitted it. So much passion, I CAN\'T stand it.
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December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*shhh!*.. don\'t let MM know that I am reviewing here or I will never hear the end of it... am treading of foreign territory here, just beucase I thought I had better check that all is in order here...
Err... are you leading up to the DA training sessions turing into a voyerism session while Sev and Herms go at it or something???....Can imagine that instruction.. \'Now if you grab this part here and give it a little twist..\' or.. Sev saying \'a womands tds to be dominated.... see how I have complelte control over her in this position.. she cannot do a thing?... you would do well to rememeber this on the battle field\'...
*grin*.. No?... damn!...
Am looking forwards to the naked tattooed Sev in next chappie... want more as soon as humanly possible...
Like now!
Shem..
(who has just realised how very dumbass this review is..)... oh do shut up!
Err... are you leading up to the DA training sessions turing into a voyerism session while Sev and Herms go at it or something???....Can imagine that instruction.. \'Now if you grab this part here and give it a little twist..\' or.. Sev saying \'a womands tds to be dominated.... see how I have complelte control over her in this position.. she cannot do a thing?... you would do well to rememeber this on the battle field\'...
*grin*.. No?... damn!...
Am looking forwards to the naked tattooed Sev in next chappie... want more as soon as humanly possible...
Like now!
Shem..
(who has just realised how very dumbass this review is..)... oh do shut up!
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December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a fucking excellent chapter! You know, I always thought there was something wrong with me for liking Harry least of all HP HP characters, and I think you have hit the very sensitive Harry Potter trigger and I can proudly proclaim- GOD, I HATE THAT KID! What a jackass! Go, Hermione! Go, Severus! You tell him! God, I want him. I\'m drooling... and sighing... and... you don\'t want to know.
By the way, Utah is in western USA and is full of Mormons. Don\'t know if polygamy is really legal there, but I know it\'s practiced- even if rarely. But if you won\'t move, I guess I\'ll just have to have Severus to myself.
You know what- if your other half has a problem with you writing, tell them to get their bitch ass in the kitchen and make you some pie! (sorry, inner Eric Cartman coming out).
And don\'t worry, more of my story is coming, probably tomorrow!
You rock so fucking hard-core!
Update soon!
By the way, Utah is in western USA and is full of Mormons. Don\'t know if polygamy is really legal there, but I know it\'s practiced- even if rarely. But if you won\'t move, I guess I\'ll just have to have Severus to myself.
You know what- if your other half has a problem with you writing, tell them to get their bitch ass in the kitchen and make you some pie! (sorry, inner Eric Cartman coming out).
And don\'t worry, more of my story is coming, probably tomorrow!
You rock so fucking hard-core!
Update soon!
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December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"TOUGH SHIT?! I\'ll be damned if i get over it. hey, sev, come with me not her,\" I say desperately. grrrr... you took your time to update didn\'t you. but i\'m glad for that late christmas present. screw harry and ron, i never really liked their character anyway. can you tell us ginny\'s reason of going to hogwarts soon? i need to delve dr inr into this. and you must give pity y poy poor nerves. please do update soon. merry christmas!
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December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok...this was an amazing chapter. I loved the confrontation between the two fs. Is. Its amazing that a tornado didnt occur. I loved the description that Severus gave of Hermione. Accurate, I would say. Very well done.
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December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY Hermione! What a wonderful rant. That pair of prats need to mind their own business... as does Ginny.