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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30... This makes me so sad for Hermione!!! I know that they have a very volatile relationship & that is being mild, but things were just starting to seem to settle down for them!!! I really can\'t blame her for walking away, she has already been through so much & now this:( I hope that he realizes that if she didn\'t truly love him, she wouldn\'t care at all!!!
I also understand Severus\' feelings about this, not to mention his p!!! !!! He now feels that he can be useful, not even realizing how much he has done without going to revels!!! I do hope that he loves Hermione enough to have a greater will to live than he ever has in the past... she needs him!!!
Very interesting situation with Ginny & Draco!!! Seems that Albus has been keeping secrets again, but at least now we know the how\'s & why\'s of their involvement!!! I\'m sure that Hermione is afraid for Ginny (as well as a good bit angry) & I think it\'s going to take an awful lot for her to put any trust in Draco!!!
As always I will be looking forward to your next update of this ABSOLUTELY AMAZING story!!! Til chapter 31, Deb >^..^<
I also understand Severus\' feelings about this, not to mention his p!!! !!! He now feels that he can be useful, not even realizing how much he has done without going to revels!!! I do hope that he loves Hermione enough to have a greater will to live than he ever has in the past... she needs him!!!
Very interesting situation with Ginny & Draco!!! Seems that Albus has been keeping secrets again, but at least now we know the how\'s & why\'s of their involvement!!! I\'m sure that Hermione is afraid for Ginny (as well as a good bit angry) & I think it\'s going to take an awful lot for her to put any trust in Draco!!!
As always I will be looking forward to your next update of this ABSOLUTELY AMAZING story!!! Til chapter 31, Deb >^..^<
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one hot twist. one hot severus. one hot headed hermione what more could i want? more hot f*ck oh yeah!
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is a great story! Update soon!
Tiffany
Tiffany
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! I loves me a good ass-kicking!!!! Something about Sevvie and \'Mione fighting really gets me going! You know, ass-kicking boots and fuck me boots are not altogether dissimilar! Oh, I knew it was Draco- stupid bitch. Wish he was evil, though. Likes my Draco evil...
But alas he is your Draco and I have to take him (many times) how he comes.
Oh, God!
I need a man. Entirely too many innuendoes in that last sentence.
Anywho- almost teared up when \'Mione was thinking about how glad she was to have Sev in her life. I say almost because I am an evil bitch with no emotions. At least tonight I am. Damn split personality.
Loved the chapter- eagerly awaiting more, and as fro the cliffie hint- how much bigger a cliffie do you want?!?!? I had you almost convinced I\'d killed off Severus in an HG/SS story! I say that\'s a good cliffie! Anyway, must stop drinking Mt. Dew energy drinks... Been writing far too long.
What was I reviewing again?
=) *M*
But alas he is your Draco and I have to take him (many times) how he comes.
Oh, God!
I need a man. Entirely too many innuendoes in that last sentence.
Anywho- almost teared up when \'Mione was thinking about how glad she was to have Sev in her life. I say almost because I am an evil bitch with no emotions. At least tonight I am. Damn split personality.
Loved the chapter- eagerly awaiting more, and as fro the cliffie hint- how much bigger a cliffie do you want?!?!? I had you almost convinced I\'d killed off Severus in an HG/SS story! I say that\'s a good cliffie! Anyway, must stop drinking Mt. Dew energy drinks... Been writing far too long.
What was I reviewing again?
=) *M*
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great twist! I can\'t wait to see more!
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So sorry to hear about your back, but I\'m really glad that you\'re back!!! I am glad to see that I\'m not the only one that drinks for medicinal purposes;-)
Chapter 29... Well, this is one of 29 FABULOUS chapters!!!
For starters, I so hope that this situation will not interfere with Hene &ne & Severus\' relationship since she\'s back to smacking & yelling at the poor man!!! Will she remember that she had been thinking **I just wish I could tell Severus that my life was so much better for having him in it, the good and the bad.** before she was found?
This is a VERY INTERESTING turn of events, Draco and Ginny being spies for the Or!! !! After what Hermione did to them, without a wand, I can see why they put her in a body bind!!! Your Hermione is stile bae baddest bad ass of all, I LOVE HER!!!
I am looking forward to the rest of this story as well as the sequel (I ct tht that maybe, will begging help? PLEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!) Can\'t wait for chapter 30!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
Chapter 29... Well, this is one of 29 FABULOUS chapters!!!
For starters, I so hope that this situation will not interfere with Hene &ne & Severus\' relationship since she\'s back to smacking & yelling at the poor man!!! Will she remember that she had been thinking **I just wish I could tell Severus that my life was so much better for having him in it, the good and the bad.** before she was found?
This is a VERY INTERESTING turn of events, Draco and Ginny being spies for the Or!! !! After what Hermione did to them, without a wand, I can see why they put her in a body bind!!! Your Hermione is stile bae baddest bad ass of all, I LOVE HER!!!
I am looking forward to the rest of this story as well as the sequel (I ct tht that maybe, will begging help? PLEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!) Can\'t wait for chapter 30!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YaaaaaaaaaaaaaaY thank u for updating and I hope ur back is heaps better now. I just finished re-reading this fic and then found a new chapter on the end woooohoooo. Awwww Hermione and Sev fighting again lhey hey really are a hopless case lol and Ginny and Draco undercover spies interesting. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do a sequel. *gets the plot bunnies jumping 4 ya*. Update soon plz :)
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well I didn\'t think that would happen spaecaily Ginny that was a surprise . But keep up the great work.............I want to see their faces after that.
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whew...I swear that is one Hermione that I wouldnt like to meet in a dark alley. No siree...Poor Severus has his hands full.
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is such a good story, and it has really good writing. Ive been reading this story in 2 sittings- and ive noticed just how much tighter the last few chapters have been. They\'re brilliant! There\'s a funny thing about being a reader of fanfiction..You read so much of it (like myself) that you can sometimes forget the enormity of a story, and yr senses can seem dulled by the recycled storylines, etc.
Not this time. Although a few of things which happened in the previous chapters i have read before- i dont know who wrote them first so dont get angry!- this story has a great plot and the characters are slowly being drawn clearer and the reader becomes embroiled in.,Umm, not sure if you\'ll understand what i mean by that..
Anyway, what i wanted to say was i really admire how you write seemingly the simplest of things, yet, with such an intensity that it really resonates. Ive found myself going back and re-reading chapters because i like them so much!
Btw, i really like your individual thanks to ppl at the end of each chapter- i think it makes it much more personable. As a reader you sometimes forget that the authors are ppl just like the rest of us, who need to know what the reaction is. And let\'s face it, we all relish human contact and connection- even on the internet.
Thanks again! I\'ll be looking out for more of your stories, and hopefully you\'ll finish this one!
Roisin, from B\'ham, England.
P.S. You know the tattoos that Hermione has? I know you mentioned that you really like tattoos, so are they yours?
Also, i liked the use of \'Romeo&Juliet\' as a dramatic peice to get the 2 oppposing classes working together. That was a great way to show dramatic conflict!
Not this time. Although a few of things which happened in the previous chapters i have read before- i dont know who wrote them first so dont get angry!- this story has a great plot and the characters are slowly being drawn clearer and the reader becomes embroiled in.,Umm, not sure if you\'ll understand what i mean by that..
Anyway, what i wanted to say was i really admire how you write seemingly the simplest of things, yet, with such an intensity that it really resonates. Ive found myself going back and re-reading chapters because i like them so much!
Btw, i really like your individual thanks to ppl at the end of each chapter- i think it makes it much more personable. As a reader you sometimes forget that the authors are ppl just like the rest of us, who need to know what the reaction is. And let\'s face it, we all relish human contact and connection- even on the internet.
Thanks again! I\'ll be looking out for more of your stories, and hopefully you\'ll finish this one!
Roisin, from B\'ham, England.
P.S. You know the tattoos that Hermione has? I know you mentioned that you really like tattoos, so are they yours?
Also, i liked the use of \'Romeo&Juliet\' as a dramatic peice to get the 2 oppposing classes working together. That was a great way to show dramatic conflict!