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how do you kill off ron too?!?!? *starts crying* no, im really crying!!! i cannot believe that you killed them off!!

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

i want another ch!!! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! i loved it so much. i started to panic when you were hinting that hermione was dead, i was almost hyperventilating!!! i was so happy when she was alive!!!!!!!!!!!!! *still in panic mode* so scared, so scared!!!! make sure that she lives!!! *gets murderous glint in eyes* she must live!! and it never occured to me that you would kill off severus, cuz you would never kill him off......right?!? *starts to look scared again* ahhhhhhhhh, i never know wats coming next!!!!!!

my ppls were looking at me like i was crazy cuz i was freaking out about ron and harry dying. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, i just remembered tha minerva is gone, how could you kill them all off!!!!! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!

alright--i have once again been reduced to tears reading this story at my desk. i love this story and can\'t wait to see how it ends.

Good chapter, and pretty sad for Harry and Ron and Minerva to die. But of course this is war and not everyone lives, especially those on the front lines. So a sequel to this? Wow, I can t wait to read that. Is Lucius dead? What of Ginny and Draco?

elementaldeity

So sad. So tragic. So beautiful.
I am sad that this is about to end.
(sob)
Cheers dear.

OH please let her live!!!! I know the muse controls the work, but PLEASE let your muse have a heart!!! Poor Severus! I was crying and then she touches him! Oh it\'s almost too much! Damn you\'re a good writer!

Hugs,
Ness

that was the best fight sceen I have read in a long time and that fact that was so well written didn\'t have anything to do with it. The f act I felt the heart break that Severus felt prier and on and after the battle......... almost cried when he picked up harry and started to cross the gounds holdinghim in his arms............................. Like I said a wonderfull chappy and as all ways keep up with the excellent work.

You know this chapter wrenched my heart!!! And what is this about the sequel??? You never told met itt it was going to be LM/HG... What are you going to do to Sev??? Write the chapter like now.. this is the Beta talking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Write write write!!!!!

Oh man..Writing battles has GOT to be one of the hardest things to write. I applaud your attempt in this chaptVERYVERY well written. and THANK YOU for not killing off eitSeveSeverus or Hermione. I wouldnt have been pleased at all...LOL. Another fantastic chapter.

Red

Oh man..Writing battles has GOT to be one of the hardest things to write. I applaud your attempt in this chapter. VERY well written. and THANK YOU for not killing off either Severus or Hermionewoulwouldnt have been pleased at all...LOL. Another fantastic chapter.

Red

I\'m speechless, which is not exactly \"comme il fault\" for a review, I know. But I just had to do something, I dunno, leave a crumpled hankie or a tearstained handprint. Your story has touched me very deeply, and...just please update it soon. Bless you, Kait