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for Strong Enough

by grrarrg0908

person shemhamforash
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*ponders around aimlessly after being suitably chastised by magnificent author*

Ohh yes...loved it...violence, anger and angst all combine in the end for one hot mutha of a shag fest...who will come out on top, or will they take turns *smirk*

What do you myouryour turn with Sev? He is sitting right next to me! Geeze! Whoever you have been playing with I can assure ys ths the result of poly-juice potion...would like to get together though just to see how \"accurate\" the stuff actually is in transformation*evil grin*..No I am not insane...It is a lie I say *restrains self from launching through screen to bite you*

Wanting more...loved that one. Loved it.

Shem xxx
person PotionsMistressM
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love a good ass-kicking every once in a while, especially involving Hermione and especially when Hermione is not a helpless victim! God, I love what you\'ve done with both Snape and Hermione (Although, I\'d love Snape even if he suddenly formed a Gilderoy Lockhart fan club!). The fights are right up my alley, so please keep \'em coming. Smut is great, too (and desperately hoped for), but this is just such an underrepresenteted aspect of the HG/SS relationship- please don\'t stop!
I WANT MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter. I can\'t wait to find out what happens next. I love how you had Severus and Hermione take out their aggressions toward each other. Update again soon.
person JC1207
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait till the next chapter comes out ! Its a great story, there is only one thing wrong with it...I wish the chapters were longer!!! Anyways keep up the incredible work (great plot too btw).
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I think it\'s great seeing Snape a little vurnable and not a hard ass all the time. Please update soon.
person Sophie
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

Well, this story is amazing. I like how you write and I like that you start with a part of a song in the beginning. I love \"Life For rent\" by Dido so much and now that you took it as an opening for your new chapter I simply had to review. I hope you won\'t wait too long to update, because I\'m rather excited to read another chapter.

So, go on. You\'re doing a great job.

Sophie

PS.: Sorry, if my English is a little bit confusing. It\'s not my native language.
person cookie35
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THat lost part made my heart leap|!!! too bad he didn\'t realize it was hermione. good job in this part. The plot\'s getting thicker and deeper! you did a good job in this chapter. It was very like Snape to be loyal like that. I always thought he was meant to be a gryffindor! keep up the good work!
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok...apology first...have been leeching off your work from the begining *bad girl* and have yet reviewed...have taken the liberty of sending Sev away for and hour as my punishment *Smirk* Then I shall proceed to put my head through the wall before drowning my shame in endless supply of vodka always on hand....By that time Sev should have return, and can proceed where we left off...I am deluded...I know...

Anyway, am emensly enjoying your tale...even in my stupor of insanitym ham hanging out for next update

You are to be commended on a delightful peice..although still a little disappointed WW3 didn\'t occur..ahem..Herms and Sevvie knocking heads, or wands as it were...some hot shagging soon should make up for this...

Shem xxx
person Louise
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loving it!! More & faster please! ;-D
person PotionsMistressM
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Do you really mean it when you say reviews help you write faster? \'Cause I can write reviews until I turn blue if it means I can feed my new addiction sooner! I really, really, really LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!