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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...commando Hermione and G.I Sev, got in a spanking off Grandfather Tinkle...*ahem* Twinkle....Never thought Sev would go for \"Butch\" type chick...But a butch type chick who can cry is better than one who....Ahhhh fuck this crap...it is too early in the bloody morning for me to be poetic or bloody saracstic.....*ouch..Sev...Im trying to review this lovely authors work...behave*...
I loved that addition...Loved it...Reformation of DA...hmmmmm....Oh the possibilities..
*no..ohhh...higher...ummm...no...shhh...Sev..*
Waiting for more..*mmmm* just cause I am loving...*oh...you devil...* it so much....
Shem *who is curently too distracted by Sev\'s \"attention\" to know if any of this made sense*
I loved that addition...Loved it...Reformation of DA...hmmmmm....Oh the possibilities..
*no..ohhh...higher...ummm...no...shhh...Sev..*
Waiting for more..*mmmm* just cause I am loving...*oh...you devil...* it so much....
Shem *who is curently too distracted by Sev\'s \"attention\" to know if any of this made sense*
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is great. It\'s about time Severus got his ass kicked. Could it all be sexual frustration? More please!
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A great fic - a fabulous first fic. I am very impressed. I love the development of Hr. She is wicked!
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven\'t been able to review for awhile, my computer crashed and it finally got fixed. I loved Dumbledore\'s little speech and the fight that Hermione and Severus got into. I also like the fact that you were able to throw some of thier past in the story as well. Also, I liked how Hermione was thought of an angel, maybe that can be pet name for her in the future, or maybe incorporated in the story more; like they both end up each other\'s salvation for the upcoming future? Again just to re-interate awesome story and I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Like Zephyr can I ask for lemons to come?
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the way they act towards one another -- but restarting the DA sounike ike a ton of work!
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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 is AWESOME!!!! Holy Moly, Hermione is one tough & pissed off witch!!! I am really adoring this story & can\'t wait to read more!!! Deb >^..^<
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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So, here I am again. This story is just simply awesome.
I love this dark Hermione, well not really dark, but strong. And I like this tension between her and Snape. I thought you would let them release this tension in thsi chapter, but you just let it go on. That\'s quite interesting. And I\'m curious to know what Dumbledore will do with them. Has he heard all of the things they said and will he punish them?
Well, I guess I will read it in the next chapter, won\'t I?
Now, thanks for the compliment on my English and go on with this wunderful story. I can\'t wait to read more.
Sophie
I love this dark Hermione, well not really dark, but strong. And I like this tension between her and Snape. I thought you would let them release this tension in thsi chapter, but you just let it go on. That\'s quite interesting. And I\'m curious to know what Dumbledore will do with them. Has he heard all of the things they said and will he punish them?
Well, I guess I will read it in the next chapter, won\'t I?
Now, thanks for the compliment on my English and go on with this wunderful story. I can\'t wait to read more.
Sophie
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I loved the angry Snape and Hermione scene! Perfectly done.
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
And you my dear are Divine!!!! As i told you before.. Great chapter and a great start for the lemons.
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy! The stuff has hit the fan! And wow what a hot chapter! These two rock! Seriously I love this story and can\'t get enough! More more more! ;c)