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by grrarrg0908

person shemhamforash
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Grrr......evil cliffie...grrrrr....Loved the conversation...highly amusing...can see Sev trying his hardest to pull Herms through the receiver and strangle her...

In response to your question---24yr old single, Australian of Maori decent with 2 perminant attchments 5 and 3. Latent goth and Satanist, deleriosly lost in delightful world of Sevvie Snape...throw in Marilyn Masnson and the words double penentration and I suffer from sensory overload...enjoyable way to die though...ummm...have afintwithwith Vodka and Edgar Allan Poe, like Mass murderers and am generally all round pleasent person to know *cringes in pain from biting tongue that is firmly stuffed in cheek* ummm...yep I think that is all...wait..nursing student *I hate I hate I hate* and fic author of SS/HG ships who loves to mess with the security blankets of such readers.. yep that\'s about it...

Wanting more.....Lots more Snapey goodness comming I hope....

Shem xxx

P.S. I don\'t believe I got through this review with no lewd remarks about Sev...most disturbing...shall have to remedy that next time...*raises eyebroe at you in vey Snapeish way daring you to be a smart arse about it*
person Lindsay
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wicked story, keep writing. ^_^

im 16, live in southern United States.
person Helena
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
I\' ve been reading your story and I\'m enjoying it a lot!!! This is the first time that I review your story (don\'t be angry with me!!!) and I\' ve read the last part of the last chapter, and I start thinking what a hec, why not!? So I\'m telling you that I\'m from Portugal amd I would love to know more about you ( if you don\'t mind, of course!!!).
So, I\'ll keep waiting for your answer, oh and of course your updates!!!
person Helena
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh! By the way I\'m 18, single and of course a loyal fan of our beloved Snape and everything related to him!!!
person Rilla
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
27, Western NY. :)

I love that this chapter was all bits of cell phone conversations - you were able to cover a lot of time that way. And I love that she calls him her family. *sigh* I\'m getting all gushy now.
person kate
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
damn, woman, you know how to write your conversations! this chapter is spot on, catching the -- uh -- affection between these two. i love the smell of sarcasm in the morning...

can\'t wait to see if hermione\'s hang-up is due more to an unexpected event in ireland or because someone has begun to discuss something on the mobile or wireless phone that could easily be intercepted by anyone with a short-wave radio. not that i\'ve ever had such conversations, mind you. i\'ve just heard. yeah, that\'s it. i heard about that stuff.

please -- feed the reader with another update! saturday night\'s alright for fighting, but it\'s a long way from now!
person kate
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
doh -- forgot your request. 42, female, married forever, 3 little girls, midwestern u.s. native yank but don\'t hold that against me.
person Temptation
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi -

Just wanted to let you know I\'m roped in to reading. I\'m also 21+ and on the east coast of the US of A - a little place called New Jersey (southern NJ).
Keep up the writing I especially liked the last part with the cell phone.
person Deb >^..^<
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14 was GREAT, LOVING this story, NEED MORE!!! Love the calls between Severus & Hermione, too cute!!! I am so curious to see what her final comment was referring to!!! looklooking forward to more, this ride has been a blast so far!!! Deb >^..^<
P.S., As for my info, I am another 40+ (Hi Kate*
person Fish
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"I swear to the gods that the student