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for Strong Enough

by grrarrg0908

person kate
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yummy! i LOVE the tattoo -- and a couple in nuthin but leather boots ... girl, you got nothing to be scared of from this new york/chicago thug-ette!

thank for the realization that sex (almost) always complicates things. can\'t wait to see how they manage. and please tell me that they DO manage!
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LORDY, LORDY, SOOOOO GOOOOOD!!! They are so damn good together, well you wrote them together so well (not to mention HOT)!!! Sounds like Sev wants a HUGE piece of Malfoy ass & I bet he wouldn\'t turn down the other meaning of that from Hermione if they decided to get a little rough again;-) I do so LOVE this story!!! Will be watching for more*
person shemhamforash
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*bares teeth in anticipating defending your honour* Would be my pleasure to bite anyone for you, especially certain dark, brooding Sex God who shall go nameless *raises eyebrow*...Would also like to know if you would marry me after reading that chapter...Am currently trying hardest to stop self melting into puddle under desk...SO DAMN HOT!...Am happy little Satanist ...how very surreal...

Loved the description of Sev\'s tattoo...very Russell Crowe from Romper Stomper...Orgasmic mental imagry...I love you..truly..

Seems all my badgering/ threatening has paid off...quite pleased with myself...

Still, my Sev is quite content now...hasn\'t gone anywhere for a few days...my life is now perfect...*sigh*

Wanting more...and that was perfect...

Much love and respect,

Shem xxx
person cookie35
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
woohooooo!! that was HOT! a very exhilirating experience! im starting to get ideas. i think he\'s startng to get protective of her. i really like your portrayal of sev coz on most stories he\'s like this guy who\'s very regretful of his past and all so when he has sex he\'s like this very weak hearted guy who says sorry on every occasion. your sev is way off the mark!! i love him!!! but what a way to end the story!! hope you don\'t get offended but that sucked for me! i wanted more! hehe!! keep it up!
person Pixi
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to throw my two cents in. Normally I scan the thank you\'s. I don\'t read each individual one, but it is nice to know that when you\'ve bothered to review a fic, that the author has also bothered to read it.

Now usually I tend to wait until the story reaches an end before I review it, unless it either needsiousious help, or I find myself so enchanted that I have to tell them so. I have found myself increasingly drawn to reviewing your story, but have held off until now. I wanted you to know that I like what you\'re doing and I want you to keep it up!

Now, I\'ve been throughly enjoying this fic. I love the verbal sparring. I love the antagonism between the two characters. I\'ve always enjoyed it when a \"couple\" can\'t seem to decide whether or not they want to fight or kiss. This reminds me a lot of watching moonlighting with my mom when I was younger. Only much darker and a lot more enjoyable. I love where you\'re going with this. And I love the song quotes in the begining, its become a game with me to see if I know the song you\'re quoting and can actually sing the lines you list.

And just to answer that last question. I\'m 28, born August 12th 1975. I live in Brighton, Mass. (near boston, actually within walking distance of Harvard Square in Cambridge, Mass), yeah I\'m a yank. And I adore Harry Potter, but I love to read stories of all kinds. I love fan fic (free stories!!!!) and if you ever wanna chat with a harry potter fan from across the big pond, my aim nick is macropixi. Keep up the good work
person PotionsMistressM
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!!!!!!!!* Thank you SO much! EXCELLENT!!!! I don\'t even smoke, but I think I need a cigarette! And, boy, do I love a man with a nice big tattoo! Especially if he\'s Snape-tastic! Okay, I\'m ready for the next chapter, please. By the way, I call mine \"fuck me boots\" too. Funny how certain phrases are effective no matter where in the world they\'re uttered. PLEASE UPDATE NOW!!
person Daxi
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Could you think of a more evil place to end the chapter?! You have to update sooooon!!!! This is really a great fic! I really love the way you write, it\'s really superb!!!! Keep it up! =D
hugs!
person em
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was the best chapter ever! thank you so much for sending me the email\'s of when u update...it helps alot! cant wait for the next chapter, so get typing a.s.a.p
person cookie35
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was hot! on the contrary, i beleieve men can be be beautiful, Hermione! hehe! that was quite a chapter. Snape, wanting to look for her by going back to Voldemort means he has very deep feelings for hermione, right? That was very sweet and heart warming. hey, don\'t mind that person who made you feel bad, thats fine. i think its healthy and great that you take the tio reo respond to our reviews! keep up the good work!
person PotionsMistressM
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Only one day\'s wait! I was so excited I almost compulsively typed eighteen reviews! Sorry about that. I can\'t figure what\'s wrong. My family bought this computer brand new. I mean, it was in 1993, but still...
Thank you so much for another very, very, very awesome chapter- can\'t wait for more!
And, you know, I LIKE the way you communicate with your readers; I think it shows how much you appreciate and respect us. Anyone who has a problem with it has probably been reading and not reviewing this whole time! And if he or she has a problem, they can take it up with me \'cause I\'ll be your staunch defender- I think you rock!